|Reviews for Through the Portal|
| ClownWhosFeelnDown chapter 27 . 2/11
| SalemTheSpeakerOfTruth chapter 1 . 2/9
... Well, since Daedric Lords can shapeshift, they are neither male nor female, and thus would be referred to in the stronger titles of Lord and Prince, over Lady and Princess. Even ones that stay in a permanent female state, like Nocturnal.
| Zikarn Krais chapter 27 . 2/5
What would be awesome is if Bradas, after having found out Lerna's true identity, attacks her as she is the enemy of the Lord he serves (I honestly place my bet on Jyggalag, who, even if he is the Daedric Prince of Order, still contains the chaotic elements of his other half) and manages to shut down Lerna's powers.
By doing so, it leaves her vulnerable for the first time in this story. Currently, she goes around with the belief that nothing can stop her. Even Arngeir had to resort to threatening her companions instead.
But if he, using Jyggalag's old connections to the Shivering Isles, manages to shut down Lerna's abilities entirely...oh what fun it'll be.
I doubt she'll die because of rather stupid plot armor, but it'll be good to have her actually be hurt and not simply come back from it 2 mins later. Also goes to show that even she is not infallible and that there are always ways around her power.
We'll see indeed...
| ARavingLooony chapter 27 . 2/4
Lol I wonder what Lerna will think when she runs into Sinderion's corpse in that house in Blackreach which obviously she won't recognise if she didn't do his Nirnroot quest.
| VulpineSnow chapter 27 . 2/4
Lol, Nice chapter... I have a sad confession... one character I made slew Parthurnaax. Cage the Breton Arch-Mage... He did it to get the Blades off his back. Kinda 'blue-and-orange' morality silliness.
... I do not consider it worth it, even if I have an easier time against dragons.
... Now, on a different note, the story itself... I look forward to the travels of Blackreach, freeing and slaying the imprisoned Ancient Dragon. XD
| Ronin Kenshin chapter 27 . 2/3
good chapter gotta ask will she meet serena? great work
| Trojan Prince chapter 27 . 2/3
Awesome chapter once again. I am looking forward to seeing how you write out the battle with Alduin and the end of the civil war. It also would be good to reveal Lerna's immortality and godhood to say Ulfric or Tullius. It could open new story possibilities.
| Oerba Yun Lightning chapter 3 . 1/24
After reading this chapter I then imagined the prisoner scene you wrote but introducing her self as the Mad God in a Joker like fashion. And something like this should have been a thing in Skyrim where if you had a Oblivion save with Shivering Isles completed when you did the Sheo quest they looked like the model from Oblivion
| Guest chapter 26 . 12/16/2013
Idea for civil war is that the gods call a full end to hostilities in season unending. Course you'd have to make it work so the thalmor aren't suspicious, like the Stormcloaks go to the Shivering Isles and join the daedra already assaulting thalmor bases. Just a thought I had.
| Drow79 chapter 26 . 12/15/2013
Is it too late to vote for the civil war? If so well I'm pro Legion but if you do pick Stormcloaks can you make them less racist that's the reason I hated them plus you have to kick out Baalgruff from Whiterun and he was my favourite Jarl.
| luna sanguine chapter 26 . 12/3/2013
I'm holding to see her use the grey cowl and talk with the thieves guild and seeing their reactions
| VulpineSnow chapter 26 . 11/10/2013
Hm... I never could bring my OCs to join the Forsworn. I just couldn't. They always end up killing Madanach and moving on. Tasha the Argonian Thief-Sassin, Cage the Breton Arch-Mage of Winterhold, numerous OCs that escape me, and so forth. XD Every one of them kills the Forsworn and gets the near-useless Ring for an easy Smithing Enchantment.
So, clearly, siding with the blood-thirsty madmen of the Reach gets better rewards. Lol.
| Blood-Hawk-531 chapter 26 . 11/8/2013
You keep misspelling Alduin's name. It is irritating.
Aside from that, and some relatively minor grammatical issues, you're good.
| Trojan Prince chapter 26 . 11/8/2013
Great to see you have updated. I know what you mean. I haven't updated because my life is so busy with my masters degree. I also know how hard it is when you lose inspiration for a while. I hope you update again soon or when you can. Also one suggestion i have, you get Lerna to curse Elenwen and the Thalmor at the embassy to do a kanga line across Skyrim for a day.
| Trojan Prince chapter 25 . 10/13/2013
Your story is just what i wanted to find. I have been looking for a good fanfic that includes Sheogorath/Champion of Cyrodill in Skyrim and you have provided everything i wanted. I especially love the actions of not just Sheo and Talos, but the other gods as well Aedra and Daedra.
I love the romance between Sheo and Talos and the characters, you have done an excellent job. Ireally hope that you update again soon. I know life is often hectic, but i really want this to continue.