|Reviews for Dance of Slavery|
| Dreaming light 14 chapter 17 . 8/24/2013
OMFG! This is amazing! Ty Lee is so bad ass! This story you have written is so good. I just plain out love it.
| Dreaming light 14 chapter 8 . 8/24/2013
Mai, that Bitch! If only she was dead. But at least it gives your story interst, but I was already interested before. Now that Mais in the story... I want to see what happens to her. Man, I'm so excited yet, I feel so mad, I dislike Mai with a burnjng pasion.
Anyways, the story so far is really good.
| EmeraldTyphoon47 chapter 22 . 8/17/2013
This is quite simply THE most amazing Aavatar fanfic I've ever read! You've managed to write a story where the characters act in a believable way and also managed to present a Zutara scenario that was both plausible and nice to read. I particularly liked how you managed to give Azula a backstory to make her more sympathetic and also your spelling, grammar, and vocab were top-notch and much better than most authors on this site.
Overall an excellent story. Btw, I've started reading the sequel, and I hope you update soon
| Guest chapter 23 . 7/11/2013
Nice ending :) I read the beginning of the second one (the author's note, that is), and I'd like to thank you for posting a happy ending in addition to the depressing one. I've got a depression condition, see, so it really sucks when you're all emotionally involved in a story and then the author kills the character off and you get all depressed over it.
| Guest chapter 14 . 7/6/2013
The way they act when they're cuddling is the same for me and my boyfriend :) except we have an inability to keep our hands off each other.
| koby chapter 10 . 7/1/2013
Wow, way to make katara a whore.
| DaOneInDaCorner chapter 16 . 6/11/2013
I was reading this chapter and I immediately put together the simmilarities between Katara & Zuko's love in this, to Romeo & Juliet. So I sorta end that line of though with 'If they end up committing suicide in the end, as an act of there love, I'm gonna fucking MURDER this author...' (J.K.)
| SleeplessTonight chapter 26 . 5/17/2013
Warning: this review contains spoilers
Heloooo :) nice job with the writing. Some actions seemed OoC but I thought you still wrote zutara well. And I have to admit, I liked the tragic death ending better than the real one, but at least there's a sequel with the living ending.
| misuky7 chapter 26 . 4/19/2013
This was a beautiful story. :3
| Angie chapter 1 . 4/12/2013
It the was the best zutata fanfiction I've ever read . Keep going! :)
| Princess Rex chapter 1 . 4/8/2013
| phsclassof2012 chapter 1 . 4/5/2013
love this story so much
| Marii1038 chapter 21 . 3/31/2013
I love this story and I would like to encourage you to past or email this o the writers of avatar the last air bender they might make a comic about this and I'd love that, but they would sell the comic to maybe an older audience.
| Marii1038 chapter 26 . 3/31/2013
I sorry I'm only writing a review now I had to read the whole story. I actually just finished and I'm going to start reading the Sequel after this.
You are a great write and this story is full of passion and emotion.
I love this!
| 13girlsrule chapter 26 . 3/8/2013
This story is truly inspirational. You did a great job telling the story from the different points of view. Super good job. Bai.