|Reviews for Dance of Slavery|
| Guest chapter 26 . 1/19
Oh my goooooodness
Well I'll admit I'm kinda dissapointed the defeat of Ozai was so... simple. But damn you really sent the message of 'eternal love' out there. At first I wasn't gonna read the original ending, but I gave in and I'll tell you it made me cry. Really good writing and this was definitely something different and had many things I was not expecting.
Ps: my only complaint is that I didnt like the fact that zuko slapped Katara a few times inthe beginning. .. I mean even in his worst days (aka ponytail days), I felt he had a sense of respect; especially towards women... ahhh i dont know he just seems like the type that would respect a woman no matter what.
But regardless, great story!
| Guest chapter 14 . 1/18
Quick question about thus chapter... at the beginning when Zuko is "Talking to the moon"... was this inspired by Bruno Mars' song? Because I started fangirling so hard when I read it lol
If it's not, then I don't care because I'll still relate it to Bruno's song whoops
| nekogirl017 chapter 17 . 7/6/2015
Couldn't Zuko have just burned Ozai to death while he couldn't move? Just saying.
| patricia chapter 10 . 3/1/2015
Am I enserio angry, for that katara of supporting all the humiliations while zuko don't tries to apologize? I cannot stand that you speak on her interior fire that has katara but you make her act as the submissive one.
| OptimusPrimegirl213 chapter 1 . 1/24/2015
Wow love this very much teheh
| naeoff18 chapter 24 . 8/25/2014
This chapter brought me to tears. My life is over. This chapter has ruined me. MEH. :''''''(
| naeoff18 chapter 10 . 8/20/2014
Holy crap... C-c-can I just b-be Katara!?
| WolfDreams14 chapter 17 . 8/24/2013
OMFG! This is amazing! Ty Lee is so bad ass! This story you have written is so good. I just plain out love it.
| WolfDreams14 chapter 8 . 8/24/2013
Mai, that Bitch! If only she was dead. But at least it gives your story interst, but I was already interested before. Now that Mais in the story... I want to see what happens to her. Man, I'm so excited yet, I feel so mad, I dislike Mai with a burnjng pasion.
Anyways, the story so far is really good.
| EmeraldTyphoon47 chapter 22 . 8/17/2013
This is quite simply THE most amazing Aavatar fanfic I've ever read! You've managed to write a story where the characters act in a believable way and also managed to present a Zutara scenario that was both plausible and nice to read. I particularly liked how you managed to give Azula a backstory to make her more sympathetic and also your spelling, grammar, and vocab were top-notch and much better than most authors on this site.
Overall an excellent story. Btw, I've started reading the sequel, and I hope you update soon
| Guest chapter 23 . 7/11/2013
Nice ending :) I read the beginning of the second one (the author's note, that is), and I'd like to thank you for posting a happy ending in addition to the depressing one. I've got a depression condition, see, so it really sucks when you're all emotionally involved in a story and then the author kills the character off and you get all depressed over it.
| Guest chapter 14 . 7/6/2013
The way they act when they're cuddling is the same for me and my boyfriend :) except we have an inability to keep our hands off each other.
| koby chapter 10 . 7/1/2013
Wow, way to make katara a whore.
| DaOneInDaCorner chapter 16 . 6/11/2013
I was reading this chapter and I immediately put together the simmilarities between Katara & Zuko's love in this, to Romeo & Juliet. So I sorta end that line of though with 'If they end up committing suicide in the end, as an act of there love, I'm gonna fucking MURDER this author...' (J.K.)
| SleeplessTonight chapter 26 . 5/17/2013
Warning: this review contains spoilers
Heloooo :) nice job with the writing. Some actions seemed OoC but I thought you still wrote zutara well. And I have to admit, I liked the tragic death ending better than the real one, but at least there's a sequel with the living ending.