|Reviews for Checkmate|
| sevisharrysdad chapter 7 . 3/4
luv ur story. you are extremely talented. I only know 2 other ppl as good as you. congrats.)
| Tblu2326 chapter 17 . 2/17
I kind of don't want to finish this, anymore.
At first, the Romance between Harry and Draco was sweet. But then I realized how Draco really doesn't move all that much from being a pawn throughout the story. It isn't obvious at all, but it is still 'their', you know?
For instance, I don't like how he seems so DESPERATELY in love with Harry Potter. Or the fact that when Draco does something wrong, its shoved in your face that what he did was obviously wrong. Especially if Harry was the victim. Reverse it, and suddenly it's okay. Harry didn't mean no harm by it, it was just an 'accident'.
I like conflict, and when it popped up in this story, it was suddenly shallow when Harry was involved and deep for Draco. I wish there was more of a balance. Instead, I keep getting the feeling that Draco was kissing Harry's ass every step, after awhile. It was sweet how he risked his life to protect Harry, and cunning. But when it was Harry turn to do the saving, it happened in a blink of the eye. Very anti-climatic. I did love the scene with the Unicorn, though.
| emma taylor chapter 18 . 2/17
That was apsalotly amazing
| SuperSaiyanTeemo chapter 18 . 2/1
Beautiful work, glad to see draco made it especially
| Shalott45 chapter 18 . 1/22
This was just...wow... You really had me wondering if Draco would feel the need to betray Harry or not pretty much the whole way through. Capturing writing, awe-inspiring story - it is amongst my three favorite Drarrys. I'll definitely read this again in the near future! :D
| Sakihinata chapter 18 . 12/28/2013
wow, that story was quite something! I loved it, it was sweet and heartwarming, the relation between Draco and Harry, and beautifully written, too.
I quite enjoyed myself :)
| Sumi Anzu chapter 16 . 12/27/2013
It was soo heartbreaking and touching.
Harry finally got the hint that the chess game play. Draco plan for a suicide in order to protect harry. He knew and saw that his father sent him a killing curse.
The way he fall in snow with a peaceful expression is forever in harry and my heart
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/23/2013
This is unbelievably adorable. I'm not a fan of slash but this is too cute to not read.
| Sin1213 chapter 19 . 12/22/2013
This is the story that started my obsession with H/D back in 2004,..I. just finished re-reading it, and I enjoyed it as much as the first time. Still one of the stories out
| gaap237 chapter 19 . 12/18/2013
This story was beyond fantastic. I read it in almost one seating. I just could not put it away. Definitely one of the best of its kind that I've read. Everything was just perfect.
| Guest chapter 9 . 11/15/2013
So many feels! I love it !
| drarrylover101213 chapter 13 . 11/13/2013
I'm in love with this story! Is that a real dance? I'm beyond confused about Draco's true intentions! YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER!
| ColorsofaYinYang chapter 19 . 10/19/2013
Oh. My. Gosh.
How do you write so much? And so well? This is sooooo amazingly good, I read until 1:25 AM for 3 nights in a row! This was crazily heartfelt and the characters were, like, perfect in every way! And the ending, holy smokes, I could not figure out how the ending could go without either Harry or Draco dying on us. But the unicorn dream and the wandless healing, and the Magebond, and the marriage ritual (I forget what it was called, sorry). But it was SO EXTREMELY AWESOMELY GOOD! Thank you thank you for writing it!
| Michy Drarry Shipper chapter 18 . 10/5/2013
Beautiful story, well worth reading!
| Michy Drarry Shipper chapter 17 . 10/5/2013
Hahaha wow! Longer than GoF? That's amazing! This was a beautiful chapter and I'm so relieved that Draco's plan finally came to fruition.