Reviews for Intertwined:Deception
RavenRechior chapter 12 . 5/23/2013
LOL! Even though it was short... it was still AWESOME! MORE! erm... Keep up the awesome work!
RavenRechior chapter 11 . 5/23/2013
OH SHIT! eep... -hides- smitty is evil after all... too bad... they could use another good guy... a spy, even... oie...
RavenRechior chapter 9 . 5/23/2013
Holy shit... hehe I think i like James... too bad he's evil :P but maybe that's why i like him... hmm...
RavenRechior chapter 8 . 5/23/2013
Dun Dun Dun... CLIFFY! YAY! lol I know, most of my comments are kinda retarded, but hey... I realize I'm weird... and I've decided to embrace it. -clears throat- oh yea, Keep up the awesome work :P
RavenRechior chapter 6 . 5/23/2013
RavenRechior chapter 5 . 5/23/2013
aww man... Poor Avon. -huggles Avon-
RavenRechior chapter 4 . 5/23/2013
Those evil relatives killed her! Bastards! -a la south park- they killed beth! you bastards!
RavenRechior chapter 3 . 5/23/2013
whoa... Fire! -notices a flame appearing next to my computer- eh. -blows- Dont worry, folks! the computer is NOT catching on fire! -ahem- anyway...
RavenRechior chapter 1 . 5/23/2013
umm... was she eating pot brownies? . -hides the pot brownies-
LoneWoolfette chapter 13 . 9/9/2012
AHHHHH! This story is amazing! I have read all of them and I am super impressed! You're really only 13?! I'm 14 an I wanna start writing, but unless I can do it thru my iPod, I'm afraid it was not to be:'( if someone knows how to, send me a shout out! PLEASE!
Sincerely The Sign Painter chapter 13 . 8/6/2012
Sincerely The Sign Painter
Sincerely The Sign Painter chapter 12 . 8/1/2012
Oh dear!
Smitty! Why?
Great chapter,
Sorry that I didn't review on the last one
Sincerely The Sign Painter
Knightrunner chapter 12 . 8/1/2012
Leonardo DiCaprio chapter 11 . 7/31/2012
dramatic. love it!
psychic-pineapple-paper chapter 11 . 7/31/2012
Woah! His powers being a curse... wow. i honestly never thought of that being in his past. i always thought of his parents having powers in secret but that... You amaze me with your awesome writing abilities. High praise for you. Hope you update soon. Somehow I imagined Vashti kinder but this is way better. What's going on with Danny?
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