Reviews for Superhero
FoulerGlint60 chapter 1 . 3/12
this is an intristing story i am interested to find out what will happen.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/27
I guess you could say that Maisy is the Maine character in this story.
LonelyLamppost chapter 1 . 5/16/2014
I love this story. It's cute and really kind of sad too.
This is great writing!
Autobot traitor chapter 1 . 7/25/2013
Please keep going! I want to see Misty meet Maine Later! Great job!
AuroraBlix chapter 1 . 6/30/2013
Nah, kid, Maine ain't a superhero...*swoons* He's a god!
: )
h311h0und chapter 1 . 11/13/2012
so cute goodness my maine has a way with kids lol... loved the story
Stickx chapter 1 . 9/16/2012
That was really cute.. Loved it :)
Petchricor chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
that was ADORABLE! MORE! MORE!
dude chapter 1 . 8/27/2012
add another chapter it was alright
Kozak chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
I loved it! It's nicely written :)
KxNovax77 chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
Would you consider turning this into a chapter story? I love reading about the freelancers and i liked your character Maisy in this story.
Wolf chapter 1 . 4/5/2012
That was so cute. And emotional at the end.
Ayane458 chapter 1 . 4/5/2012
Oh, that was adorable! 'Mister Superhero'... hehe.

Bit of mood whiplash at the end, which was done really well.

Good work!
FLAMESLASHER chapter 1 . 4/5/2012
Very good story. The grammar was good, and I liked how you wrote the little girl's thoughts. I couldn't find any mistakes, and the description was ok, and fit the character really well. Overall, a Goidelic story. I hope you continue.

I don't suppose you could review my story, Halo: The Last Stand?