Reviews for Brighter, Appease, Venture
LisaLoo chapter 4 . 4/5/2012
Sigh. I've been struck by that inevitability before. Done bother fighting it Bella!
mrsm0803 chapter 3 . 4/5/2012
Snort .. Yeah I'm sure Edward is crying in his sand castles. I hate Tanya even when she's written as being nice. Lol. Glad Bella stood up to him.
LoveMeSomeAngst chapter 3 . 4/5/2012
"life is hard when you're a hot bartender/owner in the tropics." Mmmhmmm, I bet.
singlegrlmusing chapter 3 . 4/5/2012
I love my daily escape to the tropics!

Loving this story and so very curious to see how these two are going to navigate things.
archy12 chapter 3 . 4/5/2012
hm,perhaps Edward's stomach flipped too,and he is trying to push her away,knowing she will leave one day-sooner or later.
maria2906 chapter 3 . 4/5/2012
Oh boy, Peter is a good guy but that still doesnt help me like all the lovey dovey interactions with Bella lol :P I will keep thinking of them more as friends than a couple, it works for me :D

I dont agree with the way Edward spoke,but I can't say I disagree with him :/ It does seem like Bella needs to find her own identity, she doesnt seem to be bothered much that she's tagging along with her bf and that "oh ok" when he says "I have money so it's cool" attitude isn't very good :/ Of course she's working all these years so it's not like she's taking advantage of him which is why I'm glad she stood up for herself :)

And of course Edward, the jugdy judgerson, will see how amazing she is once he gets to know her. Even though he's not too happy with her staying because he's already thinking about her more than he should hehehe, much like she is doing!

Thank you for the update :)
FFpassion chapter 3 . 4/5/2012
Thank you for the update, I'm loving the story.



moonCarol chapter 3 . 4/5/2012
Oh, I bet life's hard lol Edward, don't be jackass.

ps. I hope there won't be problem with update today ;)
HockeyChick10 chapter 3 . 4/5/2012
Edward, open mouth, insert foot.
sabriel017 chapter 3 . 4/5/2012
GAH! I love that they're both kinda-sorta under each other's skin. Of course there's that pesky Pete problem. Damn him for being nice. ::idly ponders if Tanya & Pete can go off and be nice together some place else:: lol

Thanks for the update. xox
shonla chapter 3 . 4/5/2012
Can't wait for the next chapter.
shonla chapter 2 . 4/4/2012
Great chapter.
eyes 4 edward only chapter 3 . 4/4/2012
Edward going to definitely get to know Bella so no more assuming. Can't wait for the next update.
tff000 chapter 3 . 4/4/2012
annniej13 chapter 3 . 4/4/2012
Hahaha go bella sticking up for herself. He seemed a little uneasy about her sticking around. Not gonna be able to get her off your mind for a while, buddy. Lol. Great chap, Ro. xo
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