|Reviews for Brighter, Appease, Venture|
| MoniNP Monica Nopi chapter 3 . 4/4/2012
well.. hellooo Tanya...
surprise, surprise Edward!
Love the sparks that are starting to jump back and forth!
See you tomorrow bb! Thank you! xx
| reds-red chapter 3 . 4/4/2012
| robsten63 chapter 3 . 4/4/2012
La-la-la- LOVE IT!
| reds-red chapter 2 . 4/4/2012
Loving it! It sounds like a pretty goofy group of friends. Then there is the hawt, gorgeous bar owner...
| apk1980 chapter 3 . 4/4/2012
I'm so glad it finally works! I say it at least once per story, but I just love you!
| KJHN chapter 3 . 4/4/2012
oh MAN I need to reiterate how much I LOVE YOU, my dear. OF COURSE the beautiful bartender/owner Edward is with a gorgeous twin named Tanya. But both he and Bella are gravitating towards each other and fighting it-doing anything they can to disqualify their attraction to each other. Edward throws out flippant comments; Bella reminds him that he doesn't know SHIT. All amidst the glow of a bonfire in an island utopia. LOVE. xx, KJ
| insanemum chapter 3 . 4/4/2012
I'm sure that got Edward thinking - now that she's staying. Still going to do that hot blonde double hook-up now, Edward? ;)
| EdwardsBloodType chapter 3 . 4/4/2012
I love that he made assumptions about her and she didn't weaken. I like strong backbone bella:) Im loving this.
| Capricorn75 chapter 3 . 4/4/2012
Oooh, feisty, po'd Bella. I like her!
And in your face, FFnet! I finally got in, so screw you!
| Jenny Window chapter 3 . 4/4/2012
Ooh, I feel all spiky after reading that. Tanya's niceness, Bella's unease, Edward's presumptions. Good stuff!
| KristineM chapter 3 . 4/4/2012
You tell him Bella. Great chapter! Thanks so much!
| DMBSJB18 chapter 3 . 4/4/2012
Nooo tanya! Why does E always come with baggage? Usually in the name of Tanya
| nondescript user chapter 3 . 4/4/2012
I felt my feathers get a little ruffled along with Bella's there. But I know we'll get plenty of chances with Edward. Right?
| gabby1017 chapter 3 . 4/4/2012
Hot bartender in the tropics is very suspicious of people and makes assumptions.
| snowgood chapter 3 . 4/4/2012
Poor Edward, he's probably everyone's vacation! He might want to be someone's serious!