|Reviews for To Fly on Dragon Wings|
| Bernstien chapter 4 . 11/6/2018
Are we ever getting an update, or is this well and truly dead?
| Guest chapter 4 . 2/15/2018
Are you going to update this story?
| Haiogh-Yai chapter 4 . 1/15/2018
I really like this story! I hope you continue it
| Cats are my World chapter 4 . 12/18/2017
It's good, but there are a bunch of little, annoying typos. For examppe, I do believe that you mean 'Greek' fire or 'Greece' fire and not 'grease' fire. You have used 'u' instead of 'you' (only once to my knowledge but, personally, I find this one of the most annoying typos.)
Sometimes you summarise things in a somewhat 'awkward' manner. To fix that, I recommend writing the chapter until it is finished and then waiting a few days. After those few days reread what you wrote.
Might I recommend getting a beta To help with the typos?
PS: spell check and Google Translate work wonders on finding awkward sentences and typos (have Google Translate read the writing out loud.)
| greenisacolorto chapter 4 . 10/6/2017
Fufufuuu, and Lien arrives. I really like this fic. There aren't a lot of Harry/Temeraire crossovers and even less where a HP character is reborn as a dragon. And pretty much none of those are complete. I hope you manage to finish this one at some point in the future because I think it's pretty glorious. I wonder how Harry will continue living as a magical dragon with a captain he doesn't much like.
| Guest chapter 4 . 8/2/2017
Plz update as soon as possible ! I love this fanfic, and I will die if you leave it at this!
| TetrisLame chapter 4 . 7/29/2016
The french sure seem incompetent here. Harry's basicly spitting greek fire, which was horribly effective in any kind of warfare. He's perfect to torch ships and even other dragons with a simple strafing run.
| davidsurmava chapter 4 . 7/28/2016
Loved the story, please update
| Philosophical quetzalcoatl chapter 4 . 7/6/2016
please update this
| Dragon Courage chapter 4 . 9/30/2015
Will harry ever get weis as his captain? Maybe mortiferus should notice harrys fascination of weis and realize that weis us harrys captain. Mortiferus takes weis captive and forces harry to bring back caroline. Then, with weis still captive, caroline and mortiferus escape forcing harry to help them and they make it to england somehow? This sounded interesting to me.
| jayswing96 chapter 4 . 9/30/2015
This is such a great story. I can't wait to see what's next! :D
| Light Lord Cybergate chapter 4 . 9/24/2015
Lol...you think that was impressive...
Wait until Harry starts to apparate...or use a flame freeze charm.
I wouldn't even be surprised if he could change his size or heal himself in the middle of battle.
| razska'spromise chapter 4 . 7/23/2015
Please update. I love this story and wish to read more of it, it is fantastically written and has an interesting plot.
| Chris c3po chapter 1 . 6/29/2015
Wow, well done. Excellent characterization, you take care to not add too much detail, an amateur mistake, one I tend to make. Unique presentation, what more needs to be said? A diamond in the rough. 10 out of 10.
| Martin Blue chapter 4 . 6/14/2015
Looking forward too seing this fics development