|Reviews for When Forever Becomes a Lie|
| Dancing-Souls chapter 3 . 8/20/2012
Oh nice really good chapter I like the part about the abyss and Oz's heart!
| Blizzard1827 chapter 3 . 8/16/2012
| Sakural7865 chapter 3 . 8/16/2012
I like what you have here. Though, it reads a bit too fast. A few commas here and there should fix that. But all in all, a good read!
Keep up the good work!
| Blizzard1827 chapter 2 . 8/2/2012
very good keep going
| Defender of the Pen Alexis chapter 2 . 7/29/2012
*SPOILERS FOR THOSE WHO HAVEN'T READ THE PANDORA HEARTS MANGA*
I think Gil's going to kill Jack if Oz becomes Jack and B-Rabbit becomes Oz again. Which is going to take a few more manga chapters if it really does happen. But I wonder what Lacie is doing in Abyss or where ever she is now? And what is aniki Vincient doing now that Jack is trying to cause another Tragedy? So many questions, too much suspense!
| Defender of the Pen Alexis chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
I love Pandora Hearts, is this going to be based off Oz/B-Rabbit or Javk and Oz's relationship? About 75 manga chapters are up now.
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/5/2012
Like the story, continue! -GuestReview
| seeker421 chapter 2 . 5/22/2012
It's awesome! xD
I like how Oz loses his memory, so he has to take time to figure out who he really is, whether he's Oz Berzarius or Oz the B-Rabbit.
Can't wait for the next chapter :)
| Dancing-Souls chapter 2 . 5/15/2012
Yay can't wait I am guessing right! Well I don't know where it will lead can't wait to read and find out!
| Dancing-Souls chapter 1 . 5/15/2012
Nice I am liking this and you have such a great hint. I think I may know where you are going with this. Either way I love it!
| LovelyDemon chapter 2 . 5/15/2012
Yey I'm happy you wrote another chapter! Oz is really funny!
"And I am his royal majesty the king of England" when Break said that I laughed my ass off. Poor Oz doesn't know he was joking. Lucky Alice told him the truth.
Well but you made a small mistake (I'm not trying to flame you, don't get me wrong!) when Alice called Gilbert 'Gil'. Well usally she calls him Seaweed head, but when she's nice, in a good mood or being serious she calls him 'Raven' not Gilbert or Gil... Sorry, I know it's not important and I probaly sound like wiseacre. Just wanted to tell you...
But keep up the good work! I'll look forward to the next chapters!
| witchsoul531 chapter 1 . 4/26/2012
cool! continue it its awesome!
| LovelyDemon chapter 1 . 4/5/2012
Well Oz is OOC... But that's probaly beaceuse he lost his memory, he's still cute! Wonder what Sharon and Break will say if they find out.
| Roith and Lorette chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
Lorette: *Waves* Hallo!
Nice story Lorette enjoys :D
(The person who has no idea what to say)
| anon chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
Oh my god! I love this and it is only the prologue. I've always wanted to find a story like this one where Oz loses his memory. Wait...does that make me a bad person? Anyway, great story!