Reviews for celestia meet samantha
FoulerGlint60 chapter 2 . 4/6
Contuning the story?
RoamingSoul Spartan-017 chapter 2 . 12/29/2014
ok this story is great but, you should make the chapters longer to keep the readers intertwined with the story, but other than that, its good. Sincerely- Roaming Soul
Nosfrat chapter 2 . 4/16/2013
"da"
"son of a bitch"
I died at this point.
buttershoes chapter 2 . 1/3/2013
So far so good, that sucks that you cant think of a way to keep it going.
wolfeekun chapter 2 . 5/25/2012
I'm sad, i've just discovered it and now it's discontinued. However i understand and hope to see more chapters in the future.
Lost Guy chapter 1 . 5/8/2012
hahahahah! Richtofans las line.. priceless!
RayLedgend chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
Maybe you could try giving some punctuation marks a try next time? I mean, I don't wanna be a jerk, but come on. Half your sentences (particularly the dialogue) didn't even end with periods, or question marks when those were appropriate. You could also stand to be a little more liberal with your use of the comma. I can't exactly critique this as a story when we've only got one chapter, but those mechanics of yours need a lot of work.