|Reviews for General Dedication|
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/5/2012
This is an excellent start. Continue please.
| Caitlinger chapter 3 . 4/12/2012
| God of Insanity chapter 2 . 4/10/2012
Good start and nice flow so far. I'm curious to see where this will go and how exactly the triangle will play out. And man, Zack really is coming on strong, haha!
As for Sephiroth OOC, yes, I've seen that around , but also the same for Cloud (as some weak, meek, and girly boy that he really isn't). But yes, the grumpier, the better. xD In some ways, Sephiroth reminds me of Zuko from Avatar the Last Airbender (the series, not the lame movie) and Vegeta from Dragon Ball Z. Even though both characters get angry and are proud warriors, in time they changed, they evolved. I think like them, Sephiroth can evolve if given the chance and by meeting the right people.
Anywho, keep up the good work. ;)
| Caitlinger chapter 2 . 4/10/2012
JESUS FUCKING CHRIST WOMAN.
SCARIN' THE SHIT OUTTA ME WITH AN UPDATE ALREADY.
lol um i rlly lykd nd i fap fap fap fap.
| Caitlinger chapter 1 . 4/5/2012
OH GODDARN IT ALL WOMAN.
Y U SO BRILLIANT?
and so the story beghins.
SEOHOHHYIRGHOTH. -epic theme music- dundundudnudn,
| Mister Jackkkk chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
Amazing writing. I thoroughly enjoyed this first chapter and I look forward to many more, the length was perfect for an introduction and I love the personas.
Please update soon.