Reviews for Malpais
Mary Brown chapter 1 . 9/10/2016
Fun story - I always enjoy a Slim centric story - especially when you young lady in distress is present. Surprise ending! Let's see some more!
Nana56 chapter 1 . 4/21/2012
Is this the Slim story that you've been trying to do? It's so very him!

Always makes me furious when the bad guy runs his horse into the ground. X-( Poor things will just keep going until they die. :((

Slim is such a good guy! A true gentleman. I can really see this.

Nicely done. :)
sb4ever chapter 1 . 4/8/2012
What a story! And what a contrast to your other story! You are a very talented writer.
kayaklady chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
The presentation of Slim is spot on and the OC of Mittie is both sweet and sad. Sure you can read this tale as an action story, but take a moment and think things through a second time and you will find a deeper story. The comparisons that the reader is invited to draw between Mittie and Sir Walter’s heroines Rowena and Rebecca are thought provoking and create a very bittersweet tale.
BettiAnn chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
Poor Slim, and poor, deluded little Mittie. Well described with great diction. A wonderful sad story.