|Reviews for Breath of Fire: New Beginning Awakening|
| James chapter 1 . 4/25/2013
I like that the story is about Ryu, and on going of BOF3. I also like where you are going with this, however, i think the way you explain things could be, more serious. Like how you said, Ryu was pissed off. To make that seem less child like, You could of used such words as: Irate, Furious, In raged. Just a thought.
| Darkcrest27 chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
it has a lot of potential i hope you continue withit
| DinglexBarry117 chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
I like this please write more:)
| FenrirSS chapter 1 . 5/10/2012
a lot of potential. I think it might have been better had the war (inheritance) still been going on; but as i said... potential.
| Undying AS - Fire chapter 1 . 4/5/2012
I kept seeing Momo as 'Homo' for some reason...probably because i have to throw humor into every damnable thing i read lol.
Not to fast too. Keep it up broski :DDDDDDD