|Reviews for World Under Siege|
| I Dream of Spring chapter 1 . 10/14
Thank you for an incredible read, I loved every moment of it. I've not been able to stop thinking about this fic in between reading sessions. Fantastic plot, amazing writing, wonderful characterizations. I'm going to read the sequel, I very much hope you'll add the sequel to ao3.
| Peque Saltamontes chapter 32 . 9/23
Hi! I read your stories in AO3, but I somehow overlooked this one...? Or maybe it isn't in AO3? Whatever, I really enjoyed it. I love how you didn't shy away from a very dark!Loki, and Jane was also really brilliant here. Your writing is amazing, as always. I will go on and read the sequel now. Thank you so much for writing this.
| Beckyd13 chapter 32 . 8/10
OMG. I don't know what to say. We've been re-watching all the marvel films in timeline order and I couldn't wait to watch Thor and Dark World again - I've always loved Loki, and watching those films totally reignited my love of Lokane. Weirdly I've never read fanfiction for them though - so I had a look and after a bumpy start I found this via a rec on Tumblr. OMFG I'm glad I did. I devoured the whole thing in about 3 days. It is astoundingly written - so in character. The dialogue is incredible. It's deep and has so much plot going on you just know that you're going to keep reading to see what happens next. Literally couldn't put my phone down. Gah! I'm actually glad that you have some ThorxJane in here, as I always liked that from the films, but my heart lies with an enemies to lovers tale every time, so I can't WAIT to read the next one and then come back to re-read. This story is definitely one of the favourite fanfics I've ever read, and I read a LOT of them. Thank you so much for writing it xxx
| zindad chapter 32 . 5/25
Wonderful epic story! So looking forward to the next!
| zindad chapter 29 . 5/25
Very emotional charged chapter. But I'm very happy that you are weaving these changes with Loki slowly (almost painfully slowly at times). It is so much more believable this way. Well done!
| zindad chapter 28 . 5/25
I love the interactions between Tony, Loki, and Jane. The disappearance of Thor and the change in their relationship seemed a little quick, but maybe you have more of that coming.
As always, I love the interactions between Loki and Jane. She is the only one that can temper him!
| zindad chapter 27 . 5/25
I loved the reveal of Mystique. Nicely written! Although, poor Jane! Another betrayal for her.
| zindad chapter 24 . 5/24
Oh my goodness, poor Jane! So much she has been through, but you make it believable. I am just having a hard time seeing Loki redeemable at this point.
| zindad chapter 23 . 5/24
| zindad chapter 21 . 5/24
What a great chapter! Now you have me sad that Jane is betraying Loki! You literally have me going back and forth.
My favorite line:
"You're such a little boy," she murmured, feeling tension gather in his frame, "a little boy…lost."
| zindad chapter 20 . 5/24
Lovely, Lovely chapter with great dialog! I think I love tipsy Jane!
| zindad chapter 19 . 5/24
I love Jane as a flirt!
| zindad chapter 18 . 5/24
Wow! A conversation, almost normal at that. Your writing is good enough that I find myself a rooting for both sides. Both Loki and the rebels.
| zindad chapter 16 . 5/24
The best and most pognient line of this chapter was the last...
| zindad chapter 15 . 5/24
You have created such a vicious Loki that it's hard to know if these small steps are real or not. I'm so glad you have made Jane hold her tongue, otherwise I would be exasperated with her character. I know she is stubborn and quite good with words, but she clearly would be learning the consequences by now. I'm sure this is hard to write, keeping her in character (and her wit is a far more interesting read), but realistically she would be restraining herself.