My friends and I recently had an absolute blast reading this. Here's a link to the video, hope you enjoy it, we very much intend to visit more KingAurthr works!

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I have actual tears in my eyes. This is just so beautiful. This story invoked emotions in me that I never thought I had. Write on, you absolute genius of fantasy literature. Write on.

I showed this to one of my friends and we loved it

Ha ha ha. I've seen the dramatic reading of this and it's god damn funny, mainly of its so bad it's good nature to it. Just damn great.

I salute you solely for the fact that your trolling was convincing enough to make me feel physically dirty by the end of the first chapter.

All in all. I'm pretty much 100% positive that this is the greatest story I have ever read in my entire life.

Omg this is really friffing good! The prose is friffing amazing very poetic very nice.

I like how when Harry introduces himself, everybody knows who he is. I also like how he says 'yes it is ture.' I also like 'we must be care.' I just love this story, and I don't know why anybody wouldn't like it. Sure, the grammar's horrible, but get over that guys. It's funny, and not even that bad when you truly think about it. I can't wait to read it again, and see them defeat the dark ones.

Okay seriously, this would be a amazing start to a story if it was proper in spelling and grammar. This is so funny. I mean, a knight charges into the room and tells them that at the holy grail has ben founded. Then they go off looking for it after King ARthur says that he has been looking for it for many years. Then he calls it a cup. HE tells Lancelot to go on a quest to find it. I already know what's going tp happen. I listened to the Manwithoutabody reading of it, three times. SO I decided to post m thoughts of the chapters here.

EDIT. PLEASE.

For the love of humanity and the English language, if you consider yourself a writer by any stretch of the word, rescue what little dignity you have left and have someone edit this!

YOUR SPELLING IS HIDEOUS!
Here is how you spell Arthu R!

Tara Gillesbie would be proud.

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I...I don't even know how to describe this... its like a bad dream... it would be almost readable, however, the lack of correct spelling and grammar has positively butchered this story. I'm sorry dear, but although this story combines many of my favorite characters and tv shows, they lack all of the charm and personality they originally brought to their own tales. The very essence of a good story has strong characters, emotion, detail and a rich and imaginative plot. So far I have only seen one of these four, and it was plot, except without the rich and imaginative. All of the characters have the same style of dialogue, and if it weren't for the "said Harry" or "Exclaimed Gandalf" I would have no idea who is speaking. You blatantly kill off characters (Important characters, I might add, that much of the audience loves) and I'm sure that people would like to see Frodo mourn a bit more over Sam, Merry and Pippin's deaths instead of just forgetting about them. It also could give you a chance to throw some motivation behind Frodo's quest to destroy the ring. For the most part I saw a lack of detail, save for a few bits and bobs here and there, try describing the lair of the Dark Ones better, sort of like "the floor crunched beneath their feet and it was then party realized it was made of human skulls. Dark red blood stained the bleached white bones, dripping off of the walls and flowing from fountains at the edge of the room. The lair smelled of rotting corpses mixed with the acrid tang of blood" makes you sort of shiver, doesn't it? All in all, you have a good start, but I would suggest that some writing classes are in order. You could also have someone look over your work (Spell checking and stuff like that) at the end, to make sure it sounds fine. Anyway, nice first attempt :)

I haf started a seqal look at my page four it! The frist two capters are already maed!