|Reviews for Vanguard of Altomare|
| perfect oblivion chapter 1 . 4/12/2012
the review below this one is mine Nick. Just so you know.
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/5/2012
Very nice first chapter, can't wait to see how the next chapter plays out. One problem though, you break up a character's remark/reply/etc, making it look like multiple people are speaking when they shouldn't. Anways, update soon man.
P.S: My computer's shot, I'm using my Wii right now, so all I can do is review and answer PMs.