Reviews for lucky girls
finallyexploded chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
Please note that your fic is in violation for using real people in your story. I suggest that you edit your fic so that there isn't any reference to real people, or move the fic to a website that allows this content. Thank you for your time.

Here is a list of conducts that should always be observed:
2. Proofread all entries for grammar and other aspects of writing before submission. 'Hot off the press' content is often riddled with errors. No one is perfect but it is the duty of the writer to perform to the best of his/her ability.

Entries not allowed:
4. Stories with non-historical and non-fictional characters: actors, musicians, and etc.

explodinghead
Member of Eliminator
dark queen of awesomeness chapter 1 . 5/14/2012
It's a good chapter but it needs a little bit of a grammar check. Other than tht it's good. Update soon :D