|Reviews for The Forgotten Contract|
| musicfan1346 chapter 1 . 2/24
This has to be the best Harry Potter story I have read so far. I loved every single bit of it. If I could and would make any changes to the Harry Potter world, this would be it. It was absolutely bad it couldn't be. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you. I enjoyed it immensely.
| Guest chapter 28 . 2/9
so Lord Potter now has a Lady Potter and is master of the Deathly Hallows
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/22
I like the cover
| caterbird chapter 28 . 1/5
Well i find this absolutely brilliant. Im sure i have reviewed this before but Im re-reading some old favourites. Great work, loved it and I hope you continue writing some of the best HP fanfics around!
| Hikari no Suzaku chapter 2 . 1/3
"I'll have you know I AM the authorities"
Bossest line of the year XD
| Axcel chapter 3 . 12/31/2013
Hey! I wear tightie whiteys and I'm twenty two! I don't like boxers, everytime I wear them they either chafe the insides of my thighs or my junk swings around smacking my legs. I need support! Guess all those guys who wear boxers just aren't big enough to need the support provided by tightie whiteys. I should start point that out if anyone calls me on it. Their expressions would be amusing, no doubt! :D
| HunterBerserkerWolf chapter 28 . 12/28/2013
Hot damn, that's a good story. Took me a few hours to read it all from start to end, and I'm glad I didn't have to deal with all the angst that I've read in another Harry/Susan story.
Kinda interesting seeing Harry jumping Ms. Bones' bones a bit.
Still, great work. I loved it.
| Engrprince chapter 16 . 12/17/2013
You are a great author. JKR did not define Ginny. You did a fabulous job.
| Engrprince chapter 13 . 12/16/2013
Again your Ron is Great. This is why I love this story. Ron is the weakest part of the HP universe, to allow him to mature regardless of who he is with makes the story that much better.
| Engrprince chapter 9 . 12/16/2013
This by far my favorite story I have read it three times. I usually hate Ron, but you have done a great job with him. Good enough to deserve Hermione. Thank You.
| HellFirePhoenix chapter 28 . 12/12/2013
of course he had been after all he is DUMBLEDORE
| Endgames chapter 8 . 12/11/2013
I feel like if the Fidelius Charm has to have some kind of power requirement or trick that makes it very difficult to cast. If every NEWT charms students learned how to cast it, wouldn't everyone (in wartime) have the Fidelius over their house?
| Endgames chapter 7 . 12/11/2013
He dismissed his guilt over Kreacher rather quickly there. I rather hope that it wakes him up to the dangers of ordering house elves, and he respects them a bit more. I mean, he caused Kreacher to burn to death. There should be some angst there.
| doubledamn chapter 28 . 12/5/2013
This kinda made the whole 'love' thing more plausible. Of course the 'love protection' thing was still bulls*it. Like Lily Potter was the ONLY mother to die for her children during the war. Still, with Voldy not being able to experience love, due to his conception coming from the effects of a Love Potion, the part where Harry feeling love destroying the soul fragment actually makes sense.
Great story, and I mean REALLY great story. On par if not better than the original work. Well done.
| Akela Victoire chapter 28 . 12/3/2013
This story was absolutely wonderful. One of the best executed marriage contract fics I've ever seen.
Thanks for writing and sharing.