Reviews for The Forgotten Contract
Nimbus2023 chapter 25 . 2/3
And that is why you shouldn't engage in premarital sex, boys and girls. Everyone knows that there is a chance it can destroy a fragment of foreign soul lodged in your partner's forehead and you risk getting that black horcrux goo all over yourself.
Nimbus2023 chapter 21 . 2/2
It is a sad state of affairs when I agree with Zacharias Smith on anything but he made a good point. A simple stupefy spell on Susan could have solved so many problems.
Nimbus2023 chapter 20 . 2/2
Hey, how about stunning her instead of trying to play monkey in the middle?
Firenado chapter 28 . 1/27
Amazing ending. I loved reading this story and would strongly recommend it to anyone I come across.
Schnuff chapter 1 . 1/26
I tried to read this...but halfway through this chapter I give up.
a) any of those oh, there is an contract and now it is time to meet the conditions and it MUST be done...is just wrong.
b) If I remember right than the usual consent in JKR stories is that magical people have a much longer life expectancy. So a contract done in 1821 is just 2 or 3 generations back...something so big wouldn't be forgotten!
AhsokaTano2291 chapter 28 . 1/15
Great story...wish there was more to read. i was hesitant to read a book with mature themes in it but you did a great job on balancing all of the aspects of the story
Cain O'Phelan chapter 20 . 11/26/2023
Perfect missed opportunity. “We are male. We don’t do hints. Either speak clearly or don’t. Who’s fault is it if you girls refuse to do so? You’ve nobody to blame but yourself.”
Pillager61 chapter 1 . 10/29/2023
Second time reading this .
Obviously I really enjoyed it!
Uplinx0406 chapter 1 . 10/15/2023
Love what you did here. Its good stuff, well written and paced very well. I feel like you rushed the ending though. Good story. 8/10 would recommend.
kingpj999 chapter 8 . 7/30/2023
Great chapter, although it's different from canon I love Regulus' journals and his quest to destroy the horcruxes.
kingpj999 chapter 6 . 7/30/2023
Finally a fic where you show the Weasleys as how they really are, a caring and loving pseudo family that really wants the best for Harry, especially Ron, once he past over his jealous phase he really is a good and loyal friend.
HeartsGlow chapter 8 . 7/18/2023
Blooper! You said he was searching for the Potter's to kill their unborn child. As Harry wasn't born yet (per you) Voldie would not have known which of any of the children to be born that summer would be his downfall, and there were several. No one can predict the date of a child's birth with any accuracy. In Canon, he decided AFTER the birth of Harry and Neville that it was one of them. He merely chose to go after Harry first, as he had planned to 'dispose' of both of them. I REALLY like the changes here in which you had Regulus writing down what the horcruxes were and that he'd actually retrieved two of them. I like that you are not following so many other authors where Harry meets his betrothed, and they quickly (usually MUCH too quickly) fall in love. This is more realistic.
HeartsGlow chapter 3 . 7/17/2023
I had to laugh at the "tighty-whiteys" comment. FYI: in the 1990s, more than 1/2 of the adult male population wore them! My hubby though, always preferred boxers, LOL.
HeartsGlow chapter 1 . 7/17/2023
Silly girl. She has six years before she has to have a baby
Just William chapter 28 . 7/17/2023
Good story, with many interesting sub-plots. Although this story was finished nearly 11 years ago there are many minor typo's in most of the chapters. Sadly, I don't think that they will ever be corrected.
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