Reviews for The Forgotten Contract
C3nterF0ld chapter 5 . 1/26
I really hope this changes but something just doesn't feel right about this. it almost feels like you build towards a high emotional moment and then it just gets cut off at the knees. I dont know how to explain it, every interaction feels like there's just something missing. imma keep reading cause lots of people say this is great but I just dunno
owl3764 chapter 28 . 1/15
Brilliant, loved it.
Vance McGill chapter 4 . 12/13/2021
First time reading this. I think my biggest complaint is Hermione's choice for a romantic partner. Wasn't Zach one of the ones who was bad-mouthing Harry in the DA? That would definitely be a turn-off for her.
CovenStine chapter 28 . 11/10/2021
I know it's not new, but it's awesome. Thanks for sharing!
Slytherin7Piece chapter 28 . 10/26/2021
This is one of the very few really good Harry/Susan fics I've read, I really enjoyed this story, well done.
Slytherin7Piece chapter 26 . 10/26/2021
Dumbledore was a real dick in this chapter.
Slytherin7Piece chapter 20 . 10/25/2021
This last scene goes to show that Harry does well under pressure but he doesn't think things through, a simple stunning spell and Susan would have been subdued but instead he tried to wreatle her around.
Slytherin7Piece chapter 5 . 10/23/2021
I've read this story a few times before and I really like it, I noticed there is a repeating paragaraph in this chapter.
Cario Regun chapter 28 . 9/26/2021
damn another amazing story hahahaha
suryamgangwal63 chapter 28 . 9/24/2021
this might have been the most anticlimactic harry potter ending ever
Sorceress of Magic chapter 28 . 7/25/2021
That was great
reg.Slytherin chapter 28 . 6/15/2021
I am really glad that I found this gem within this app. I binge reading this for a day. I only has 2 somewhat kinda lowpoints of the story 1. It's Felix Felicis not Felicious
2. I was kinda hoping Hermione and Fred end up together hehe.
All in all I am surely going to visit your profile.
A10riddick chapter 1 . 6/8/2021
Great start!

Loved the ending of this chapter!
shakinbake chapter 28 . 5/19/2021
Can’t believe I only just now found this. Held my attention the whole way.
Paul Waltz chapter 5 . 4/8/2021
How many more chapters of incompatibility must we wallow through ?
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