I really hope this changes but something just doesn't feel right about this. it almost feels like you build towards a high emotional moment and then it just gets cut off at the knees. I dont know how to explain it, every interaction feels like there's just something missing. imma keep reading cause lots of people say this is great but I just dunno

Brilliant, loved it.

First time reading this. I think my biggest complaint is Hermione's choice for a romantic partner. Wasn't Zach one of the ones who was bad-mouthing Harry in the DA? That would definitely be a turn-off for her.

I know it's not new, but it's awesome. Thanks for sharing!

This is one of the very few really good Harry/Susan fics I've read, I really enjoyed this story, well done.

Dumbledore was a real dick in this chapter.

This last scene goes to show that Harry does well under pressure but he doesn't think things through, a simple stunning spell and Susan would have been subdued but instead he tried to wreatle her around.

I've read this story a few times before and I really like it, I noticed there is a repeating paragaraph in this chapter.

damn another amazing story hahahaha

this might have been the most anticlimactic harry potter ending ever

That was great

I am really glad that I found this gem within this app. I binge reading this for a day. I only has 2 somewhat kinda lowpoints of the story 1. It's Felix Felicis not Felicious
2. I was kinda hoping Hermione and Fred end up together hehe.
All in all I am surely going to visit your profile.

Great start!

Loved the ending of this chapter!

Can’t believe I only just now found this. Held my attention the whole way.

How many more chapters of incompatibility must we wallow through ?