|Reviews for The War Outside Our Door Keeps Raging On|
| Brightknight chapter 1 . 5/15/2013
Good start with Asajj and Obi-wan, I really liked it. The second part, well... But I'll read the update. First part was very promising.
| Andromakhe chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
Okay. The ending with the bathroom issues was kind of...off-putting, but I did laugh.
However, the majority of the story, with Obi-Wan and Ventress in the small space was delicious. You managed to keep them both just as I would imagine they'd be. Obi-Wan polite and subtle, Ventress rougher but still with that wonderful touch of vulnerability. I, too, have noted her parallels to Anakin, but I think Ventress would have done better as Obi-Wan's apprentice. No matter. It's better this way, where they have both suffered a great many losses and can come together on more even footing. I like how you have her lowering her head sadly and swallowing hard. Obi-Wan can do that to a person. Very nice work with the pairing.
| General Herbison chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
It started brilliantly with Obi and Asajj but the whole Anakin and Ahsoka part ruined it for me. I was expecting a lovely scene with my fav couple and then you added Anakin in the bathroom... seriously ruined a wonderful piece
| almostinsane chapter 1 . 4/30/2012
Great story! This was hilarious. Thanks for writing this. God bless!
| Kashagal and Natures Ruler chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
o my goodness, that so funny!
| ToryW chapter 1 . 4/4/2012
HA! It's always been the most obvious thing to me that Anakin eats anything and everything that he gets his hands on, so the second half of this story was inevitable XD
Being the Obi/Ventress lover that I am, the first half was wonderful- I was so glad to see the two enjoying their close quarters ;) Overall in-character and great work!
| captainrexbest35 chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
hahahahahaha that was funny