Reviews for Mary Lennox Returns To The Secret Garden
Guest chapter 2 . 7/16
Gee, Colin, you didn't have to be disrespectful, did you? No you did not.
Guest chapter 5 . 9/15/2013
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peytin gay chapter 4 . 4/27/2013
Awful you slut
kelli maguire chapter 9 . 1/2/2013
What a slut, and I actually thought she was sweet. Maybe Colin should have heard her explain first. Maybe its not what it seems.
kelli maguire chapter 3 . 1/2/2013
Lol. My last name is Maguire also. So odd, because its not a "popular" spelling of it :)
PhantomWhispers chapter 2 . 12/29/2012
Well, this chapter could be much more well-written in my opinion. It felt a bit rushed and undescriptive. Try to improve. :)

Good job, though.
PhantomWhispers chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
I like it. It is rather short an choppy; but the details were nice.

However, one thing that annoyed me was your paragraph spacing. Your paragraphs were like this:

'Miss Mary, I am so glad that yer finally home! I have missed tha' so!' Dickon exclaimed into my ear.
I finally let Dickon go. Everyone was watching us, a smile on their faces. They all knew how much we had missed each other.

They should be like this:

'Miss Mary, I am so glad that yer finally home! I have missed tha' so!' Dickon exclaimed into my ear.

I finally let Dickon go. Everyone was watching us, a smile on their faces. They all knew how much we had missed each other.

That extra space would be extremely nice to have in between. :) Fantastic story. I'll read more!
Elfie-100 chapter 4 . 4/12/2012
please please please update soon x
Elfie-100 chapter 2 . 4/11/2012
Please update, I want to know happens. Don't tell me though x