|Reviews for The Descent of Magic|
| animecutylover chapter 2 . 8/24
Why doesn't Harry try muggle solutions for his knee if magical ways can't work? Or did he already try that?
| animecutylover chapter 1 . 8/24
Sounds like an interesting mystery, lol.
| Mirage chapter 30 . 6/18
Aww what an end...I think they won those over who did want to believe and all else will slowly follow ..only those who not will see it possible to late and only there child or grandchild can change there fate.
But I still think they should make a list with all magical creatures and being...and plants? Who need protection and care and who where mistreated. ...
So that every magical can get protection and cate they need and deserve. ..and not only the big or flashy ones like dragon unicorn or centaurs...but the small one too...and those you often don't see like sea folk.
And maybe open a bank vault , with gringots supervision...as they are goblins? And also magical creatures who want more respect ...and there comes all the money for different projects and places and sanctuary ...
I really hope for a second part to this ...where this two go...if they will have children together ...when possible...I so can see harry as mom/daddy how they can get closer again with there trouble children ...where there project with Hermione will go...and how they finally put down this Bastards who cursed him so badly ...they can get away ...and I en they fall in a new trap of there own making on accident. ...or get cursed by ancient relic that does not like them...or by something else...like turning muggle
| Mirage chapter 26 . 6/18
They finally talked and kissed -
They really did go a long way with so much to learn about each other , so much did change...there campaign goes nicely from the sound of it...and I think k even a saint could make the bet offer ever that would safe the world ...and there still would be people who say it is bad or stupid or to much /strange...or just those who have to always be to opposition...
I so hope they catch this Bastards who hurt him in such a gruel and terrible way ...maybe even the house defence (who was made with strong and crazy wards...by some paranoid people and made stronger over the years)and kreacher ...
but to did they try something else with this curse that changed because of his magic so he did not end as bloody meat that wants to die? That was in the memory...
And why this curses and pain and destruction to the knee? Why not more...? Good that not more...but it is strange ...maybe it should have worked like meat-eating things that slowly hurts and destroys the body.., good that it did not work and only hurt badly in the knee
| Mirage chapter 24 . 6/18
Hugo being ashamed of him for being tortured and no aurore anymore...when I think about it...maybe he needs the ice cold truth to the face... first that he is an insensitive spoiled rotten selfish child...and then I would let him watch the now safe memory's of the medics and Harry ...of his torture possible too..maybe spme of the talks they had wjere he was mesn tp hos uncle ...maybe some of the pain...and when it is only some parts... maybe then he comes out of this selfish stupid mind-set and grows up...and try to make up for being a Bastard all the time.
I think he got off way to easy with there talk
| Guest chapter 30 . 12/13/2020
very very interesting plot and pacing- I crammed this fic into two days :P thankyou for writing and bringing some brightness into my life!
| RiverofQueen chapter 12 . 11/27/2020
Best line ever. I love how Scorpius is predicting the future!
| Luzula-spicata chapter 30 . 2/18/2020
Thank you very much for your beautiful story
| HarryPotterFangirl85 chapter 30 . 12/5/2019
| Fugacity7 chapter 30 . 7/2/2019
Mostly a very good story. The gradual thawing of relations between Harry, Draco, Hermione, Scorpius, and Hugo was well paced. The premise was well thought out and interesting. The campaign to get others on-board was well plotted.
The only area I had trouble with was the Drarry romance. It just seemed too forced. Perhaps dialing it back to where Draco maintained his pride and some of his prejudices but gained a newfound respect for Harry and Harry likewise maintaining his integrity but coming to respect Draco. The breach between Draco and Astoria was slightly explained but not enough to make sense. The breach between Harry and Ginny was left an utter mystery that made no sense whatsoever and thus detracted from the story. Fleshing out those details would have contributed quite a bit to making the characters less 2-dimensional.
| Guest chapter 13 . 1/1/2019
Dash it! I was stupid enough to think this wasn't going to yet another slashfic. I'm off...
| Incendient chapter 1 . 12/29/2018
That was brilliant ! Thank you, as always, I love reading your contributions to the Drarry pairing, we are lucky to have such a great writer like you! Thank you again for your magnificent work!
| XxTaintedxDaggerxX chapter 29 . 1/20/2018
| Dude chapter 2 . 10/19/2017
You're a decent writer with good ideas but constantly faggoting up stuff means I can't read your stuff.
| Binexx chapter 30 . 7/2/2017
Thank you for this wonderfull story! )