|Reviews for When You're Not Here|
| Scatter Hyourinmaru chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
One suggestion I would give is what my friend would say to me if I was writing: try not to change tenses when you write. :)
| BarbaritaS chapter 1 . 4/4/2012
And here we have the wonderful sequel! Yeeeeees!
Oh please, please, please, update soon! I cant get enough of ShuuRen stories, this pairing just doesnt get enough love, and now we have such a wonderful author here - you MUST keep writing! Ah, its just so intoxicating! I could read this all day long..
And therefore, you should update really soon, unless you want someone very annoying (*pointing at herself*) who keeps bothering you with reviews and PMs about how she (or he of course *desperately trying to pretend shes not talking about herself*) wished for more and more and more...P
And, btw, Shuuhei is amazing seme here ;)