Reviews for Break
hopelina chapter 1 . 7/5/2015
Why oh why did it have to end there? I want more * pouts* but I love it so much even as it is I have to favorite it
TheNightstriker chapter 1 . 6/14/2015
XD LOL! I'm laughing so hard right now XD
Creat-and-carft chapter 1 . 6/7/2014
This.. is the best... finn x marshall fanfic... ever... read! This is the first or second story I've ever comment.
Randomstrike chapter 1 . 2/28/2014
XD awesome ending!
Aimiko chapter 1 . 1/31/2014
It's a really cute story :3 so please continue it!
Nica8860 chapter 1 . 12/15/2013
IT'S ADORABLE. I love it. It's short, cute, and funny.
ilove0t6forever chapter 1 . 12/6/2013
Gyaaaa! SO. FUCKING. CUTE. I loved it
KibbyPhantomhime chapter 1 . 8/6/2013
Kalypso Fox chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
Daw! How could Finn deny that sheer fuckable smexiness?! xD Loved it nonetheless; great job, can't wait to see more of your works.

Kalypso Fox
Queen of flame chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
Is Awesome!:)
PoseidonZeusHade's Son chapter 1 . 5/25/2013
Please Continue!
LykaZ98 chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
Oh my...oh my! That and with the-oh my god! So hot! You're an amazing writer. It's, really.
SilverEnderwolf chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
Ooooo but i like...i like a whoooooooooooollle lot. XD
KirishimaYui chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
This was the first Adventure Time fanfiction (not including the Ice King's of course haha) I've ever read.

Despite having a hard time trying to shake off the norm from watching it all the time and trying to put my shoes in this couple's point of view (with the certain differences in order for this story to work), all characters fit very well!

When I Finn mentioned "a new record" and the "marathon", my jaw dropped. XD I still need to get used to this haha!

Nice job! Thanks for the story!
ShizuBABE chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
XDD lol CLASSIC! Bubblegum is such a perverted genius I love it!
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