|Reviews for Hand Delivered Letter|
| ShotgunWilly chapter 15 . 3/4
Some typos I noticed, especially earlier (on that note, it's regret, not regreat) but other than that, I love it. I especially love the divergence from canon. I hope you can update soon.
Keep it up!
| city bookworm chapter 12 . 2/6
Someone else huh, I have a few guesses. You killed of Fudge and Umbridge, that changes the usual story a bunch already. I can see Neville's gran, a big target now as Minister of Magic. But that's most likely later. I'm going to guess a student though, probably not a major character. I didn't know about things from a earlier draft. It would have been an interesting plot though. The Granger's would have been in a larger part of the book then. I look forward to reading more.
| pola chapter 15 . 2/1
Well done, I really enjoy your story, I just hope you update soon!
| continental-line chapter 15 . 2/2
It's an entertaining story. I look forward to reading the rest whenh it comes out.
Grammer and spelling are better than the average FanFic story, making this an easy read.
| rdeen1952 chapter 15 . 1/27
too bad i didn't notice the story wasn't complete when I started it. Good story, hope you finish it.
| Shizuka-naru Goketsu chapter 15 . 1/17
An immortal Fluffy would be cool, it'd lead to it's own spin off!
| Miyu Hinamori chapter 7 . 1/13
First you make him a Hufflepuff (and you even write him as a Gryffindor) and now you want to make him a chaser?
| Miyu Hinamori chapter 4 . 1/9
I am more displeased that you put Harry in Hufflepuff without any good reason. And Hermione and Neville too. And no I don't have anything against Hufflepuff, I'm one myself and proud of it, but I don't see how those three are Hufflepuff. Where did his bravery disappear? Didn't you read the books? Time and time again it was proven that Harry is a true Gryffindor as are Hermione and Neville. Sure they are all very loyal and anybody is accepted in Hufflepuff but that doesn't mean that you can chuck just about anybody in Hufflepuff. And I'm also displeased by how you portrayed Ron. I'd imagine that Ron would've been more eager to socialise with Harry, Hermione and Neville if he had been sitting alone in the train like you showed us. Ron is a good lad. A bit jealous and quick to judge maybe, but he's still only a kid.
The story is nice but I am quite sad that that you are just running the story without any respect to the original.
| Mcgongall fan 10 chapter 15 . 1/2
This story is amazing. I am obsessed. Please update!
| Guest chapter 15 . 12/13/2013
can u please hurry up and write some more of ths story it is really good and intresting and i really want 2 know what is going 2 happen next
| MayumiRose chapter 15 . 12/8/2013
Absolutely wonderful story, and I love the portrayal of the characters in this one. I find it to be a good deal more believable than in the books.
I look forward to future updates, and keep up the great work!
| AJ Granger chapter 6 . 12/6/2013
Technically, you did not ground him completely. Harry has his own broom. If he would be allowed to use it temporarily to try out for Quidditch, or the rule relaxed to let him use his own broom once on the house team - it would still work.
| karthik9 chapter 15 . 12/2/2013
It is excellent chapter.I look forward to future updates.
| shadowwolf89 chapter 13 . 11/29/2013
Brilliant chapter, love the twilight reference
| Man of Kent - Railwayman chapter 15 . 11/19/2013
An excellent story so far