|Reviews for You Would Defy Nature?|
| Obvious Ghost chapter 13 . 11/26/2013
Wow... great story! I really liked the way you put in the show's humor and expressions.
| syrein chapter 13 . 11/1/2013
holy fudge! this is some awesome fic! love still prevail in the end.. and im sure Fin will find another way to be enternally happy with flame princess!
| War O' The Willow chapter 13 . 10/25/2013
Willow stumbles in, his hair a mess clothes ruffled, looking dazed with a big goofy smile on his face.
"I loved this. It took my heart. And beat it near to death. And I walked away smiling.
Also I'm sorry but the song Fire Woman goes so well with this it's amazing.
I can't deal with these emotions, man. I just. Wow. 10/10 would read again."
Then he stumbles out the door.
"LISTEN TO FIRE WOMAN BY CRUSH 40" he calls over his shoulder, then disappears around the corner.
You'll probably be seeing him again.
| BANG chapter 13 . 8/28/2013
I thought this was book 1 and you were going to write a sequel?
| Harvest-Mooniac chapter 13 . 8/12/2013
Epic way to end your story man, and thanks for the info!
| ShanaO chapter 2 . 8/1/2013
I'm so excited to see a well-written story! Especially about my favorite pairing. You think Pendleton Ward or any of the people on the show would come across your story? It'd be awesome to see an episode like this.
It took me awhile to get used to your writing style, I think some of your sentences are a little too wordy for me. Like, on some sentences you could add less descriptive words and get the same imagery I bet. Sentence fluency I think it is. Whatever though, I still love your style. It might just be me because I'm pretty tired at the moment. :p
It's obvious you're really thinking this out and you're staying in character. Will this quest of Finn's take him years? Will we get to read him mature and grow? I hope so.
I haven't read any of your other stories, but if you write Flame Prince and Fionna too, I'd definitely read that. Doesn't seem to be much FP and Finn on though...but I just browsed the communities section.
| Sam-E234 chapter 13 . 6/10/2013
I think this might be the best FlamexFinn fic on here and definitely one of the best Adventure Time fics...
I loved it, though (I wish there would have been an epilogue), very well written and entertaining.
| Mily chapter 13 . 4/23/2013
This is really riveting! You've definitely kept me on the edge of my seat. ;) I look forward to seeing how this turns out, I really like this pairing, it seems so impossible but that's what makes it great! D
| HiHi-Ai chapter 7 . 3/17/2013
Oh man shits about to get real
| HiHi-Ai chapter 5 . 3/17/2013
They're going to Aaa?! What up! So cool! I like this adventure!
| Darkmaster of the arts chapter 13 . 3/13/2013
Poor Finn. He just never wins. Hope that you're gonna write a sequel because I really enjoyed this one. So interesting and well written. Love loved it!
| Darkmaster of the arts chapter 12 . 3/13/2013
Loved it! Squealing like crazy here! Too cute! Fantástico! Go Finn! Só romantic! Hope someone stops Cobalt in time
| Darkmaster of the arts chapter 3 . 3/12/2013
Loving the fic so far. Totally agree with your depiction of PB's character. A big worried about what she'll do to stop Finn. Cool fic though, and really well written
| Johny Blade chapter 13 . 3/12/2013
I must say this was awesome. The awesomeness in inevidable. But you could have put a lot more things and it you do the right things you might have been able to make this upto 30 chapters?!
| irishfan62 chapter 13 . 3/4/2013
*sees name of chapter* "There was a Firefight"...OK, Agent Smecker...
And I seem to have severely underestimated Princess Bubblegum's cunning. And her moral spectrum. You know it's bad when the Vampire Queen has to reprimand you.
Awesome story, can't wait for the next one. Wonder what you'll do with the characters of Aaa. And wondering who you'd put Fionna with (I'd wonder about Cake, too, but fandom consensus seems to be that she's with Lord Monochromicorn, so I'm assuming you've got that, too).