Reviews for Everything Burns
Shawna chapter 1 . 1/10
Great, bitter-sweet one-shot. Although, I would've liked a little explanation on what happened to Alec. How did he die? And who killed him? It must've been one strong, powerfully-gifted vampire to take down one of the most feared, powerful, and dangerous vampires in the world, especially with Alec's gift. How could he have beaten Alec? Wouldn't Alec have just paralyzed him with his gift and been done with him at the first sign of danger? If you could write a sequel to this and explain in better detail how he died, I'd appreciate it. Keep up the good work!
TigerDiva10 chapter 1 . 12/24/2012
so sad. :(
RedHairedGoddess chapter 1 . 5/11/2012
Very good story, I like how you captured Jane's grief and rage. Whoever killed Alec better watch their back. P.S. This would have made a great story, not just a one-shot
Bellward chapter 1 . 4/28/2012
So sad, but very nicely written
Wee-hoo chapter 1 . 4/26/2012
I feel odd not having read this before it was posted but it was a great little story ;) No mistakes that I noticed XOXO
CinnamonRose1 chapter 1 . 4/5/2012
woah, deep. Great story.
Controlled by Imagination chapter 1 . 4/4/2012
This is a good story. I really did enjoy reading it well done