Reviews for The Collision
GraceBe chapter 1 . 4/7/2012
I really enjoyed how you bring Della and Hamilton Burger together and how you develop their relationship in such a life threatening situation. I really doubt Janet Brent is worth the effort, but TCOT Weary Watchdog is the perfect example to portray Hamilton's concern for Perry and his gang.

I just can't get used to the fact that your stories take place in the present time though. LOL

Cellphones and PM just don't fit together in my mind, because I adore the "noir" touch of the show too much.
kaleen1212 chapter 1 . 4/5/2012
Good story. Love how Della tried to get Perry going about Hamilton!
tengland2 chapter 1 . 4/5/2012
Interesting. Of course cellphones never work when you really need them to. Enjoy this one.