|Reviews for one direction new school:|
| Scourge The Knight chapter 6 . 8/13/2013
You're paragraphs are too smushed! A paragraph is anywhere from 3-5 sentences.
And when a character is talking; a new paragraph is required for each character taliking.
Use your brain, or go back to third grade.
| explodinghead chapter 2 . 7/22/2013
Please note that your fic is in violation for using real people as characters. I suggest that you edit your fic so that there isn't any reference to real people, or move the fic to a website that allows this content. Thank you for your time.
Entries not allowed:
4. Stories with non-historical and non-fictional characters: actors, musicians, and etc.
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| sherii chapter 4 . 11/1/2012
Finish it :( it's so good
| KageNoNeko chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
Did you pay attention to what they taught you in school? You're grammar is atrociousness. Because of your grammar, I'm going to report you since you stated that this is a One Direction fanfiction. Also, this is in the wrong category as well.
| Megan Styles chapter 4 . 9/1/2012
COOL STORU BRO
| lotti chapter 4 . 8/18/2012
| dark queen of awesomeness chapter 4 . 6/10/2012
LOVE this chapter. And r Lou and megan doing something naughty? ;P she's not gonna end up pregnant right? OMG! U hav to update soon!
| dark queen of awesomeness chapter 3 . 5/26/2012
Yay! Go Megan! I'm so happy 4 her. I can't wait 2 c how Harry will react. And when r keely and Harry going to have a kiss like tht ;D such a good chapter. Advice: when u put a title of anything either bold it or something to make it look different or else readers can get confused. Also work a little on punctuation marks. Other than thr GREAT JOB XD
| dark queen of awesomeness chapter 2 . 5/16/2012
Oooo. Already showing the feeling? ;D and I love tht she would punch Harry. Lol. UPDATE SOON XD
| ilove1D26 chapter 2 . 5/16/2012
so good! :) cant wait to see what happens next update soon:)
| ilove1D26 chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
omg loveeee it! :D Megan is related to harry! 3
| dark queen of awesomeness chapter 1 . 5/14/2012
Good beginning. I also like tht her name is Megan styles ;P is she gonna like 1 of the boys? If so could it be Louis cuz I would luv 2 c how Harry would react. Update soon! :D