|Reviews for Keiichi's Faith|
| pwashington chapter 6 . 3/12
a celestials or a demons true form is 12 dimensional maybe big enough to use a galaxy as a toothpick cotridictory body shape a voice that could make atoms vibrate and dissapate entire star sysyems it is the comuter yadrassil or nidhog that alow them to take those oh so beautiful human forms you could see the full electromagnetic spectrum colors invisible to the human eye the other side of the univers look into other planes from the one your in or even the flow of time itelf see multiple futers others or see all the way to the plank schale smell so powefull you can smell dna of there blood ehile it is still in their viens hear things from the other side of the planet or you could just read the vibrations in the air
| pwashington chapter 8 . 3/12
now thats how you do a divine battle EPIC! i am following this update people ripping planets out of orbits and using them as bats fire attacks not ordinary fire but fire ripped from the primordial spark of the big bang awsoness. By the way i pm u a while back how come you never responded?
| ToscaThorCat chapter 8 . 1/16
quick little comment. fratricide is killing your brother. the correct term would be sororicide, or killing your sister. I thought you would like to know.
| AlexanderMugetsu chapter 8 . 1/16
JEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSUSSS on french bread this chapter!
| Kei Bell 4ever chapter 8 . 1/16
Omg, omg where was Kei during all of this. I mean this was insane. I'm so scared about what's going to happen.
| Onyx2589 chapter 8 . 1/16
I'm watching this for future chapters
| AbsenceOfTruth chapter 8 . 1/16
It was as you said, intense. Also touching and leaves me wondering whats next
| pwashington chapter 7 . 12/26/2013
keep it up:)
| AbsenceOfTruth chapter 7 . 12/16/2013
Wasnt expecting Keiichi to turn into a god but it makes sense. Love how youre writing this, the style is different and i like it. Hope you keep updating! Also I guess since Belldandy went awol itll cause problems with her reuniting with Keiichi. Cant wait to read moar
| Kalen Darkmoon chapter 7 . 12/15/2013
Great new chapter. I really hope Bell and her sisters don't do anything too bad that she loses Kei forever.
| LTA chapter 7 . 12/15/2013
More please. I love this much and I'm sooo happy that Keichi became a God. I can't until next the chapter
| IdiAmeanDada chapter 7 . 12/15/2013
| AlexanderMugetsu chapter 7 . 12/15/2013
Interesting. Also good cliffhanger.
| HuuskerDu chapter 7 . 12/15/2013
Franco, that was a very nice read. Your descriptions are vivid and memorable. The use of the present tense is a bit unusual in English fiction, but I understand why you are doing it (Italian fiction is written this way). Your English vocabulary is amazing. I can't believe that English is your second language.
That was an excellent chapter, and I'm looking forward to seeing your answer to Keiichi's question, "Where is Belldandy?" I suspect the answer will usher in the third act.
I enjoyed doing the beta for you. I had also killed and 'promoted' Keiichi in my own fic (After Ragnarök) but in a rather different way. I'm not changing that, but there was a small item in your story that inspired me to rewrite my ending, and it is waaaay better now. Thank you!
Thanks again for writing such an interesting and deep story.
| Kalen Darkmoon chapter 6 . 12/14/2013
Great story so far. I hope to see more. Adding this to my watch list.