|Reviews for Primal Instincts|
| HellionWrath chapter 31 . 2/28
I hope you make a sequel to this :)
| Rain Addict CM chapter 31 . 2/15
I love it! That was a awesome story! I'm officially a fan or yours. I can't wait for more works of art from you :D
| TheJavirich chapter 31 . 2/14
Dude, this is fuckin C. I loved this story so much that I feel obliged to leave you a moderately satisfying review, but as you probably have already read, you won't be able to get any technical stuff from me xD
I will start with thanking you so very much for not killing Tonks but I had to make it dramatic so it would actually become true. My current situation was far better than being all "oh, okay, Tonks died" and then facing and actual dead Tonks! ha. Filius is so rad, by the way hahahahaha
Now, I'd like to highlight some dialogues from this chapter:
-"Of course madam Pomfrey. Now get the fuck out of my way". okay that was epically hilarious and an impressive plot twist, thank you very much for your cleverness.
-"I never expected that I would be the prince" OMG
DJSKGFKSGFKJSDHHGDLFAJ *ME FANGIRLING IN AN UNHEALTHY LEVEL* (seriously, and the little chat after that was cute too)
-"Draco... your mum is snogging Harry" DKLJFGDSJGLVSKJ RON! why is Ron such an idiot :'D
By the way, YEEEEESSSSSSSSSS I got my Harry/Narcissa! and hey - they apparently got on with it immediately because they even had a baby before Bella and Mione... or at least it sounded as if Phineas was born already.. hmm, well. Also, nice one there with Ginny and Draco. It had never crossed my mind before but it seemed to work pretty well.
-"You two are incorregible. Yes. Please be discrete". Hahahahaha you gotta love McGonagall. Fancy a post-war quickie, baby? hahaha.
-"Hermione grunted with each thrust" WELL that took me by surprise. I know you constantly write abrupt sex scenes but this time I thought it was all over and I literally snorted and widened my eyes.
And last but not least: "She had woken crying, thinking she had lost her child again."
Can you hear that? It is my heart shattering into a billion tiny pieces. /3 Poor kitten, I wish her nightmares stopped after the birth! (Aww I just imagined a very loving Bella cradling the baby as the protecting mama bear she is awwwwawawawww.) And I am so glad the girls got their revenge and Molly and Augusta didn't /just/ end up in Azkaban.
Another thing that I never mentioned was how freaking HOT was all the purring and growling while having all this amazing animalistic sex.
There really really needs to be a sequel.
As a final comment I tell you... Liidg: you are one of the most brilliant fanfiction writers I have read, and my favorite author in this site. You are clever, the plot is always interesting and the smut is awesome.
Peace out, sestra.
| TheJavirich chapter 30 . 2/14
conchetumadre! nooooooooooooooooo Tonks why wHY WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY why WHY WHYW HYWHywhYWHYWWHY #all the tears.
just no. please tell me it was all planned and it is another person or a clone no pls
at least tell me she knew she was gonna die :'(
| TheJavirich chapter 29 . 2/13
dark dark dark dark. I love it! *opens mouths caesar flickerman's style*
| TheJavirich chapter 28 . 2/12
OMG I LOVED NACHASH HAHAHAHA that whole scene was adorable and quite amusing.
"Something is clearly wrong with my sister"... umm, Bella, I think you have no right to judge here considering you are practically married to a girl 30 years younger than you, lmao.
I loved Arthur getting owned! HAH!
And! hahahahaha awwwwww Bella being jealous *o* (what a surprise... lol) but this one was particularly cute. For a moment there I had forgotten Fleur and Hermione ha slept together, ha!
| TheJavirich chapter 27 . 2/12
WOOOOOOOOOOW RICH, MAN! THAT WAS DARK! Hermione is definitely not playing around. You show 'em guuurl. Super hardcore, Loved iiiit
| TheJavirich chapter 26 . 2/12
"I told you, it's catchy" LOL seriously, your Voldy is hilarious but at the same time very very believable. Very evil and heartless.
Poor Hermione. I can completely understand her break down :((
but HAHAHAHAH TONKS WHY U SO FUNNY XDDDD
| TheJavirich chapter 25 . 2/12
AHAHAHAHHAAH "Accio blanket" Draco I love you. And Ron... Ron is still awesome.
And the sex, yes, it always has been.
but oh my... what if bella gets pregnant now?!'! that would be awesome too
| RedCarmin chapter 31 . 2/11
Awesome fic! I just love it, and I just passed this couple days reading your other fics and I'm in love with your work.I can't wait to see what you will post next, hope soon...
Wonder if you ever though of doing a fic with Hermione bonding with the 3 black sisters, maybe a continuation of witches in prison?... I love it too, and captured hearts... I also love yours Cissymione fics, and really wonder if you ever though of writing a Andymione one, I know, I know, I'm getting repeatitive, right?
I just love Hermione Granger and even if in bed she takes the role of submissive, not always, but you don't make her a weak person, much the other way, she is very strong, and because of your works is that I would love to read a fic with her together with 3, in my opinion, most dangerous and powerful witches even Andromeda. Anyway, I'm looking forward to see more of your work,hope you continue to explore the HP universe, Hermione character and all possibilites she can be pair with and be.
Again, you're a great writer, and I'm not just saying that because of the smut, but about the actually plots are very interesting, unique and holds you captived until the very end.
Thanks for sharing with us
| TheJavirich chapter 23 . 2/11
"Tom would win but the prophecy didn't say that the primal mages would live through it"
NO NO NO NO DON'T YOU DARE! DON'T YOU FUCKING DAAAAAAAREEEEEEEEEE
I am talking to you, Liidg. Not Dumbledore.
| TheJavirich chapter 22 . 2/11
I have several tiny remarks on this chapter xD...
1. AHAHAHAHA JUSTIN WHAT THE HECK I THOUGHT YOU WERE IN HUFFLEPUFF XDD
2. Oh yes, Lucius you are finally paying! I loved that scene hahaha peeling his penis off like banana?!'! rolf
3. Oh Hagrid you -not so- little creature you... very loyal, yes 3. I am kinnd of enjoying that Dumbledore is already losing.
4. DRACO AND GINNY WHAAAAAAAT DGSKGDKSJDKJG... i like it.
5. HAHAHAHAHAHA you're damn right, the chocolate route is the best route
6. Yeeesss! I can see Harry/Narcissa ship sailing :')
| TheJavirich chapter 21 . 2/11
"You are my world now kitten" :'))))) I'm gonna cry. You can tell that Bella would do ANYTHING for Hermione. She really does love her and you show it perfectly well.
I love Ron! hahaha great, he took the mark.
And you know, I find it very amusing that you sort of project what Dumbledore really is but in a much more exagerated way hahahah I like that he is the bad guy.
| thejavirich chapter 20 . 2/9
OH after Hermione's "Do I want to ask?"
the "Of course you do, don't interrumpt me with rethorical questions when I am opining" HAHAHAHAHA Voldemort is hilarious with him not even wanting it to sound like that hahaha you can hear the determination, he really believes what he says
ERMAHGERD HARRY WITH THE DARK MARK!1'!
yesyesyes I sense an awakening Bella!
| thejavirich chapter 19 . 2/8
awww the death eaters and the order chatting!
isn't that cute :))
seriously though, no sarcasm intended (well maybe a bit), I loved it. Ron and Mulciber are awesome bahahahaw. My favorite part was Voldy waving at Harry from his room XD