|Reviews for If The Red Goes Missing|
| I heart the sisters Grimm chapter 27 . 1/17
Haahhahahahahahahahahahah lol hahahahahaa dying right anyway loved it
| SlayGal27 chapter 5 . 1/12
Its actually very good.I hope sabrina punches puck in the nose
| Bubbling Bubbles chapter 24 . 8/2/2013
I don't get how Sabrina could fight with high heeled boots on...
| Bubbling Bubbles chapter 27 . 7/30/2013
LOl Jill doesn't know that its NOT their first kiss...ahh some people r so clueless sometimes...like Jill
| Curlscat chapter 27 . 4/26/2013
Second kiss, actually, Jill.
I liked that you had epilogues about everyone, and that Jack WASN'T totally over Sabrina. That redeemed their breakup a bit for me.
Very nice job. :)
| Curlscat chapter 26 . 4/26/2013
I honestly don't ever remember there being over three thousand stories in the archive.
Hey, how did they get pizza in Ferryport Landing? Did it get delivered from three towns away?
Also the hospital? Where did that come from?
So if Puck overheard that conversation about how he made her feel ugly, then WHY did he decide to insult her even more? I mean, it's in character, but not very nice at all.
| Curlscat chapter 25 . 4/26/2013
Sabrina totally should have gotten channel-choosing privledges.
| Curlscat chapter 24 . 4/26/2013
Funny, I got the feeling that Sabrina's dress was short. I guess it wasn't, if she could wear jeans under it... And a T-shirt? What about it was so scandalous that Henry didn't want her to wear it outside and Puck thought she looked sexy in it?
Also how did Mirror grin if he was a turtle?
That was interesting.
| Curlscat chapter 23 . 4/26/2013
So did Sabrina ever forgive Puck? Because I never saw her say she did.
I just can't picture Granny saying 'no way.'
Sabrina's REALLY not a very good actress. :)
| Curlscat chapter 22 . 4/26/2013
Everafters do SO die, Puck! They die plenty! They just don't die of old age!
The disappearing thing reminded me of Percy Jackson.
| Curlscat chapter 21 . 4/26/2013
That breakup with Jack and Sabrina seemed a little too easy to me.
Oh gosh you made those girls STUPID.
| Curlscat chapter 20 . 4/26/2013
Sometimes you don't capitalize Maleficent, have you noticed?
There we go. Now Sabrina's being mature. :) It's a nice change.
| Curlscat chapter 19 . 4/26/2013
Did Sabrina teach Red to pick locks. I totally want you to say yes because that would be awesome and adorable. I also want you to write a story where that happens. Please do it please please please it's my birthday!
I'm not sure how I feel about you using the Disney names for the stepsisters. Did you know that in the original the stepsisters were gorgeous but evil?
| Curlscat chapter 18 . 4/26/2013
Hansel made me giggle this chapter.
Well, why does Daphne need to go everywhere with Sabrina? Can't Sabrina do things on her own? Besides, Daphne's kind of... unpredictable. Sometimes she's all for rescuing, other times she's like, 'NO TELL AN ADULT,' and she ruins everything by being difficult.
There we go, I THOUGHT that was too easy for there to be ten chapters left.
| Curlscat chapter 17 . 4/26/2013
How does Sabrina not see that Puck likes her? She's just being stupid now.
Did you know that there's a rule about 'okay'? You either write it all out like I just did or write OK with two capitals. Apparently it's against the rules to write Ok. I learned that recently.
That was a BIT too easy.