|Reviews for Twilight the Terrible|
| Kinola chapter 5 . 6/4/2013
I actually thought this fic would never be updated again. Good thing I was wrong!
| Wing Zero 032 chapter 5 . 5/31/2013
Great job with this chapter, the explaination to Nightmare about the enviromental damage don because the absense of the sun, and the fact Ponyville is now a fortified City actually shows how much the society had just degraded to levels similar of those towns shown in FALLOUT: EQUESTRIA series and spin-offs
I liked the implication Twilight made to the girls that they may had never ever be in ponyville becsuse of the situation
Pinkie would have been still living (or surviving) in her family's rock farm
Rarity would have been either still lost or dead in the wasteland where she found the gigan geode, if she had survived, then there's the possibility that she could have become the queen of the diamond dogs
Applejack would be either still in Manehattan or lost somewhere in that forest near it
Rainbow would still be in Cloudsdale
And Fluttersh would either also be in Cloudsdale, or had died from her high altitud fall the momment she had hit the ground because there would not have been there those magic butterflies to catch her and slow her fall
Once Again Great Job, I hope to see the next chapter soon
| hyrushoten chapter 5 . 5/30/2013
Nice to see this continue. The interactions between the characters is well done. You might have gotten a little too technical when describing the situation with Whitetail Woods, but on the other hand it didn't get in the way of showing just how hard the death of the woods is on the ponies. Keep up the good work!
| tony feliciano chapter 4 . 5/22/2013
that was awesome please make more chapters
| Progos chapter 4 . 12/24/2012
Those paragraphs for the crossing-over... You're describing the Blind Eternities, aren't you?
| Geefriend chapter 4 . 12/23/2012
I really like this story. I like how they're all helping, even though it's not necessary for them. But then again, it wouldn't quite fit it they'd just said "Fuck you.". And about the "Tyrant Filly", it'd make sense if she'd at least tolerate other's opinions, considering how she really only wants to fix it. I mean, yeah, sure, a true fight would be very epic indeed, but that would not be very logical on how you had built her earlier.
I'm also wondering what Nightmare Moon will do, once she gets the throne back. Would she really be the good ruler she claims to be? I don't know. But then again, alternate universe, alternate Nightmare Moon. I guess she could get some tips from Celestia, once the Tyrant Filly is gone. You leave much room for spectaculating, and that's great. Nice story!
| Kinola chapter 1 . 12/21/2012
I feel sorry for what happened to Celestia. Having her powers taken away by the filly she wanted to raise and teach...:(
| The Midniyt Stalker chapter 3 . 12/5/2012
I like this. It's a different take on the whole Thing
| Alamandorious chapter 2 . 5/21/2012
ok, this is amusing. Twilight isn't terrible because she's evil...she's just terrible as an alicorn lol.
| deaths lovely nightmare chapter 2 . 5/17/2012
not much I can say but... daaamn, now I have to add this two my watch list.
:hands you a random muffin:
| Hanzo of the Salamander 2.0 chapter 2 . 5/17/2012
| Leaf Ninja 91 chapter 2 . 5/17/2012
This was a great chapter. please keep up the great work.
| The Unknown Twinkie chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
This is really good, can't wait for more.
| Progos chapter 1 . 4/5/2012
This is going to be *good*, I can tell.
| Celestia's Paladin chapter 1 . 4/5/2012
What in Tirek's Nine Hells... Ok let me git this straight, Twilight somehow stripped Celestia of her powers, and became something more.. she doesn't have control of the powers, nor does she have her cutie mark... Nightmare Moon has returned and is not the wicked mare of darkness... and... and... damn this fic this story is certainly different from others that I have read, and damn. Epona and Gaea this is going to a great ride.
In the Name of Her Serene Majesty Celestia Everfree,
Celestia's Paladin: For Honor and Duty, For the Sun and Moon