|Reviews for Pitter Patter|
| SegretariaDellaOfelia chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
I loved the title, and this was a great story!
| FrozenSoldier chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
Too lost in the thought of the bed sheets being around their ankles to properly comment on the fact you can spend 2000 words on a topic that many people would rush. Such a beautiful, detailed account.
| 1trueluv chapter 1 . 5/13/2012
| Janelle chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
Could this be any hotter? Good god woman. I'm fanning myself right now. This fic sizzling, but I also love how intimate and just BEAUTIFUL it is. Their love is so amazinggg ;_; Great job hon :)
| angelamorales514 chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
love this. obviously lol. can you imagine if fringe was on hbo, and we actually had scenes like this, we'd all die lol. but really, i just need one good make out scene from polivia and I'm good lol.
| Roneo chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
I know you were (it seems so much time ago) quite reluctlant to write smut, but I dare say that you are mastering on it in a quite fast pace. I think this could be one of the best I've ever read.
I enjoy smut. But sometimes smut fanfic (even erotic narrative, I dare to say) is too much a real-time telling of porn and anatomy lessons devoid of real feelings for the hopeless romantic that I am. That's why I like so, so, so much you writings.
This is slow-motion; almost step by step; but the whole narrative of the "act" itself develops as a full story, with the proper background, perfect rhythm and timing, the required exposure of facts but above all of feelings, well-established direction and apotheosic conclusion.
And they haven't even spoke a word.
The long, hot thrusting
Here's also pitter-pattering outside. But it's hot inside. XD.
| paroxysm03 chapter 1 . 4/5/2012
HOW AM I SUPPOSED TO MOVE PAST THIS AJBDJKSFBDKGFJB SO PERFECT AAAHHHH FLAIL
| Fringefan3 chapter 1 . 4/5/2012
This is amazing! Perfect in every sense of the word.