Reviews for Kampfer: The Final Saga
Beyogi chapter 2 . 1/9/2013
Mamoru seems a bit sueish, but I give this a chance. Maybe s/he won't be totally overpowered and totally dominating the story and the old team.
Right now the scene felt very much as if you described a movie scene with your own words and not really like a novel...

Thank you for writing,
Beyogi
Don 77 chapter 9 . 5/31/2012
wow didn't see this coming.
Kevinrock8899 chapter 9 . 5/31/2012
Sweet nice work on this story.
Ryan 9901 chapter 9 . 5/31/2012
Sweet I hope we find out why they keep wanting Natsuru.
Rose Contestshipping fan88 chapter 9 . 5/31/2012
wow cool ending to the first book.
Gohan Videl fan 489 chapter 9 . 5/31/2012
well things are not looking good for our heroes
Saiyan Videl fan 99 chapter 9 . 5/31/2012
Very cool ending yet they now have Natsuru
dragonball z fan 300 chapter 9 . 5/31/2012
whoa cool ending can't wait to read the next one.
thedarkpokemaster chapter 9 . 5/30/2012
Cool but what does good Kaede think right not that Natsuru was taken as you just focos on one person, I feel you need to do all of them and not just your OC, its still a good story and I hope in the next story good Kaede will fight to save Natsuru.
Sakura fan 55 chapter 9 . 5/30/2012
Nice but I feel you spent too much time on just Mamoru you need to do the others as well.
NaruSaku fan 100 chapter 9 . 5/30/2012
Nice this was cool and Sad as well poor Natsuru.
super saiyan Sakura Haruno chapter 9 . 5/30/2012
whoa cool chapters what is good Kaede feeling right now.
lost fan don chapter 9 . 5/30/2012
whoa cool this was kick ass I hope we see how the good Kaede feels anout what has happened to Natsuru.
Rocketshipping fan chapter 9 . 5/30/2012
OMG this was sweet
May Drew 4every chapter 9 . 5/29/2012
Nice chapter I wonder what good Kaede will think of this as I would like to know.
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