|Reviews for The Video Game Travelers|
| Angelo chapter 1 . 4/16
Hey. Me again. I realized, after further revising the story, that there is a lot of content that is unnecessary. For instance, "Anime style" and "Anime fall" I kind of not a good thing for a story. NO everyone will understand.
| Angelo chapter 1 . 3/31
Well, my sisters name is Vivian, and I don't have a cousin named Evelyn, but I still don't understand. Why would I have some name like Angelo and my sister's name be Star? My name could be, like, uh, um...like batman?
| JossTheGhost chapter 5 . 5/11/2012
Hmmmmm exile's keyblade convienently sounds like the x blade...
| JossTheGhost chapter 4 . 4/30/2012
Haha cool story so far I like the idea of putting your own characters in insted of using KH character. I like the fact that in chapter 4 you stoped putting what people is saying bunched of together ( Like,Angelo: Blah Blah, Star: Blah blah. I wonder what does exile have to say...well i guess i gotta wait until the next chapter...
Ps, And dude your the only Guy fanfic writer that ive ever heard of besides me, well...not including the ones that write Yaoi.
Pss, MALE POWER *raises his fist up in the air*