Reviews for Im telling you
readeeer chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
Two things

- You really need to put capitals on their names

- Its SHEMAR not Sherma

but the plot was good.
lolyncut chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
Quite the OOC story. Just a comment-names need to be capitalized and contractions need an apostrophe. "I" should always be a capital letter. I know grammar isn't the story, but sometimes it distracts from the story.