Reviews for Bring Down The Sky
Old Gregggg chapter 1 . 11/9
Meh... story sounded pretty good from the summary and it was, until I got to the part where you removed his use of chakra just to give him biotics. I was looking forward to a ninja-subject zero team up to bad though.
1stHorseman chapter 12 . 10/16
This story is awesome. Please don't abandon it
METALHELLSPWN chapter 10 . 10/6
Please update this soon I wanna know what happens next.
Alex2909 chapter 12 . 9/29
really liking the drama between the three. seems naruto might learn what happened to his home soon
FM1o6 chapter 10 . 9/14
I like the story, but you mix up the pronouns constantly, and it's not just this story.

A lot of grammatical errors, especially in the second half.

Plot's good, though.
SaucyHandles chapter 12 . 9/6
Woah, Neon, you can't leave us hanging on this note man! Ya gotta update! YA GOTTA UPDATE!

The Lonely White Mage chapter 12 . 9/5
Continue this for the love of MY SANITY CONTINUE THIS. Thank you for reading have a nice day
evilfrog1 chapter 6 . 8/7
you need to go over this story some it is chopped up in places. Its annoying and make it feel like things are missing.
Guest chapter 12 . 7/15
Noctus Of The Thousand Blades chapter 12 . 6/21
well, if your job placement is at Wallmart, then yeah it is brutal, unforgiving, and quite possibly the WORST place to work on this planet. all the managers care about is keeping product flowing. they really could care less about the employee's as long as they can continue to line their pockets. they promise all these different benefits, but always try to weasel out of following through when the time comes. my dad worked there for over 10 years, hated every minute of it.

until he started working in the back with the trucks. he is not a customer service type, he hates dealing with people. hence why he loves working in the back, the only people he deals with are his coworkers and the truck drivers. its physically exhausting sure, but at least you don't have to deal with irate customers bitching at you.
Markus-Antonius chapter 12 . 6/19
You totally skipped most of virmire... no hold the line? C'mon...
Sam chapter 1 . 6/15
Its a good story you two just need to go back and fix the typos
joshuawaters59 chapter 12 . 6/15
Can't wait for next update
Annoy mouse chapter 4 . 6/14
Getting kinda annoyed at the lack of chakra stuff. Even if the Kyuubi could be robbed of consciousness by nanites or whatever, from inside the seal no less, and it messed with his chakra, he has already shown to be capable of using it.

Rasengan is a hell of a lot more tricky than some of the other stuff he knows or could figure out on his own.

Recharging biotics? He's practically made of chakra at this point. A few attacks and he has to wait for a few minutes or whatever? Can't see it.

Same for the arm, merging with Kyuubi's chakra should if anything speed up his regeneration, and regardless some of it was his Uzumaki heritage.
jonathan.tiolichen chapter 12 . 6/13
Dojt worry too much and keep a backup pf ALL your stories, including the ones that you will delete from this site. Who knows, maybe once you finish whichever story, you might want to revive one of these shorts... Other than that, keep updating writer!
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