Reviews for Orders
Pyrrhic victor chapter 6 . 8/5
I really hope you plan on continuing this. it's been a year already since you updated and this story has s much potential! Also, you left us on a evil cliffhanger. Please update someday soon
Guest chapter 1 . 1/15
Hope your planning to continue this! You can not just leave us on a cliffy
Reviewer chapter 6 . 11/26/2015
Did you revise the story? I think some parts are different, but it could be a byproduct of my deranged mind. I'm not sure. I'm pretty certain I liked the past version though, if it was revised. Heh. If not, then please ignore this review and my very unreliable memory.
Guest chapter 6 . 11/26/2015
Please update soon! I love how Will's character is portrayed.
Aucupe Somnia chapter 1 . 11/1/2015
I love this story can't wait to hear more you are an amazing writer
sagejjj chapter 6 . 9/16/2015
I love this story! Pls continue!
Guest chapter 6 . 8/20/2015
You should write more! I really like it!
Cat09OwlCity chapter 6 . 8/3/2015
Yay! I loved the chapter, I love Will as a character, and I think the plot of this story is really interesting. Can't wait to read what happens next! Will the Araluens and Will come to some kind of understanding at any point? Does Will have some kind of moment where he finally stands up to the king? I hope so because that guy is so annoying and I'm just waiting for Will to put him in his place.
Wolfwind97 chapter 6 . 7/26/2015
Please, update soon! I'm extremely curious as to what happens next!
animals202 chapter 6 . 7/25/2015
Your action scenes were written out well and I can't wait for the update.
moniquebowman chapter 5 . 7/24/2015
I'm kinda team will and upset that they escaped. Does that make me a bad person?
Hehe
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moniquebowman chapter 4 . 7/24/2015
I personally don't mind the swearing. I love the sarcasm behind it
Will is soooo funny !
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moniquebowman chapter 2 . 7/24/2015
Haha the start was hilarious!
I really love how you've characterised Will. Like a lot
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moniquebowman chapter 1 . 7/24/2015
Glad you updated because it gave me the opportunity to discover this!
Love the idea. Very original and enjoying seeing Wills thought process :)
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whentheresawill chapter 6 . 7/24/2015
yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay omg u updated! I love your story. im so gad.
one question. any Will/Alyss?
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