awwww it's not complete.. not even close.. that's really too bad. I was binge reading this haven't red such a good fanfic in a really long time. Well it's been 4 years guess no hope for an ending.
oh well :(

Love this! I really hope you update it at some point. Would love to see more.

You can't end such a good story like this! I need another update, I used 2 days to read it all! NO! I needaanother update, please.

Just stumbled upon your story, and loved how you played it out. I'm sad to see that it has been abandoned, but I did enjoy it none the less. :-) Thank you.

More!

Oh, I guess there's no chance you'll ever update again, is there? Because that story is fantastic. And I'd beg on my knees for more. Just sayin'.

*sigh* It is as I had feared- I would fall in love with a cleverly-told narrative that would leave me hanging. Please return to this- I want to know how Alisa's adventure with Garrus ends. I'm following just in case!

Such a brilliant writing, I think the best among dozens Shepard/Garrus' fanfics I've read. So mature and smart. Its very sad, that its not complete :(

2muchfeels4me, flying away.

Beautiful. It's professional writing, it's mature, deep, and just astoundingly beautiful. You're an amazing writer.

I have read literally hundreds of mass effect stories, maybe I am searching for the ending the game never gave me. But by far I love your story the best the second being one called tranquility. I check on your story once a month in the hopes you will update it eventually. Maybe you won't, maybe I shall keep checking it until I lose the bookmark for it. Who knows. But I wanted you to know that you Re definitely a talented and creative writing and you brought a new sort of life to my favourite game. Thank you.

Such a long, detailed and beautiful story - and all for nothing. Frustrating beyond any quarian invectives. I really like your stories, but please please don't do this to people.

This is hands down one of the best Shakarian fanfics I've ever read! You're a really talented writer, who manages to capture the characters personalities and relationships so perfectly that I couldn't stop reading until the end! I'm sad to see that this hasn't been updated since last year, but I hope you will continue this amazing story one day! I sure will be waiting :) great work!

This is beautiful, mate. I only wish it were finished one day...

I don't think you have any idea just how amazing this story is. I read it from the beginning back in 2013 and was so sad to see it drop off, only to have one more update- and then nothing. I am so grateful for what you've brought us thus far, but I'll forever miss the world you've created until another update comes along.