This is fun and all, but I could do without the OC here crying almost every time we cut to her.

I don't think Turians *can* sit in an Adirondack chair - not with how their legs bend.

Thank you for writing this beautiful story.

Oooh so beautiful and emotive, so bad it's unfinished... Thank you for writing this story!

I know it has been a time, but i want to tell you i have enjoyed reading your fic. It's a shame you haven't continue it, becaude it's so good, well-written, it has a wonderfull OC and keeps the characters like if you were playong the game.
I don't know what happened to you, maybe you have a writer's block or you have too many things to do in real life, but i hope you can take your time and continue the story at some point, because this is a amazing story!
Good luck!

Quite the way to end the last chapter of an unfinished fic! Great read, been pouring through it for a few days, I really liked your characterization and the original character you created. Sad to see it unfinished but enjoyed what you posted. Hope all is well, thank you for writing! :)

Wonderful! I would love to read more...

awwww it's not complete.. not even close.. that's really too bad. I was binge reading this haven't red such a good fanfic in a really long time. Well it's been 4 years guess no hope for an ending.
oh well :(

Love this! I really hope you update it at some point. Would love to see more.

You can't end such a good story like this! I need another update, I used 2 days to read it all! NO! I needaanother update, please.

Just stumbled upon your story, and loved how you played it out. I'm sad to see that it has been abandoned, but I did enjoy it none the less. :-) Thank you.

More!

Oh, I guess there's no chance you'll ever update again, is there? Because that story is fantastic. And I'd beg on my knees for more. Just sayin'.

*sigh* It is as I had feared- I would fall in love with a cleverly-told narrative that would leave me hanging. Please return to this- I want to know how Alisa's adventure with Garrus ends. I'm following just in case!

Such a brilliant writing, I think the best among dozens Shepard/Garrus' fanfics I've read. So mature and smart. Its very sad, that its not complete :(