Reviews for embedded forever in your memory
TheWritingFreak chapter 1 . 9/25/2014
I think you captured a lot of emotion and events from the story wonderfully for so few words. Also, I think that poetry is one of the best things to use with such a complex story because nothing can top or compare to the original. Well done.
berryshortcake chapter 1 . 12/6/2012
wow! thats all i have to say about this poem, its astounding, i found myself enthralled and enchanted by the description and tone that captured suzies anguish and contemtment. you have a talent and i suggest you pursue it! the story all placed in a delightful poem that opens the mind to the sorrow and misery buried beneath. poetry like this brings people together. good luck :)
Guest chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
Wow just wow that was a very good poem you are very good!:D
Chills chapter 1 . 8/5/2012
Hey if you read the book, he never kept her in a safe in his basement, he threw her in the sinkhole before Lindsey found the page. But this is a really good poem, but maybe you should expand your vocabulary a little.
teabags chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
I love the contrast of the beginning and end you've put together... His face is the last she sees and hopefully hers will be the last he sees.

I like it !
Jess chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
OMG! THAT WAS AMAZING! I wish I could write like you!