Reviews for In the End
ChristyWIX chapter 1 . 11/5/2015
Too many things went wrong for him in this one. To the point, that I was having a hard time believing it. He was only a few minutes late to the restaurant, and they'd already given his table away? If he'd been a half an hour late, that would make sense but, mere minutes, no. He was pouring wine when the waiter bumped him. Knowing the Four Seasons the way I do, they would've comped their dinner for that egregious error. Especially, with them staying in the hotel. The rain was definitely believable, they are in Seattle after all. Interesting mish-mash of events, that's for sure.
FAXalltheway chapter 1 . 6/18/2015
Adorable!
ForeverRobsessed chapter 1 . 10/22/2014
Beautifully written :) I enjoyed reading it!
Siriusmunchkin chapter 1 . 9/15/2014
Very sweet and funny. Life is like that.
hippogriff-tamer chapter 1 . 7/10/2014
Ahh I think this proposal will make a much better story than the one he originally envisioned..thanks for sharing...
debslmac chapter 1 . 8/31/2013
:) loved this
sparklymeg chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
that was so hot and sweet! needed that after just reading your other chapter ;)
morena.davidson.3 chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
This was so lovely and I really enjoyed reading it. The lemon was sweet and sexy at the same time. Thanks for sharing :)
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
you know what this story is so great i'm setting here thinking to my self this would make a great story I can see the two of them telling there kids and grandkids how grana asked grandma to marry him and it leaves me with a big smile think about it.
lel2768 chapter 1 . 6/14/2012
Nice work - should have come with a disclaimer saying do not read in yer lunchbreak... hahaha.
A is for Angel chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
omg i loved this so very much;)

i felt so bad for edward but i love the way you wrote bella it was very amazing

thank you again for updating

this entry was so very amazing and im honored and proud that i got to read it3
DuckiBelle chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
Thank was an amazing night! Great job!
MrsK81 chapter 1 . 4/8/2012
Such a lovely story. E was adorable! Great job, hun.

xoxo
kewlwhip chapter 1 . 4/8/2012
So sweet great job!
InspiredByLemons chapter 1 . 4/8/2012
Loved this story. The odds were really stacked against Edward, weren't they? Everything seemed to be going wrong! But, as you say, 'in the end' it all worked out...

The lemon was amazingly hot, too ;-) Very nice way to end this one-shot.

CC x
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