Reviews for The Story of Moon
rainbowwolven chapter 6 . 7/31
is this the end of the story? Please continue it! im lovin it! I read it over, and over, and over again! w
rainbowwolven chapter 5 . 7/31
I like this story! P.S unexpected plot twist was unexpected :D
Guest chapter 6 . 3/26
Raven chapter 6 . 12/28/2014
Please continue! I LOVE it! I will be writing the story I mentioned in my previous review soon, and with an actual account. Please check it out!
Raven chapter 2 . 12/28/2014
I love the story so far! The funny thing is, Raven is the name of my OC! Her left eye and ear were burned away by Shard, who has fire claws. This occoured after Raven's mate and ony pup drowned a year before. What a coincedence! Keep it up!
Ebony Mirage Amber chapter 6 . 11/13/2014
Guest chapter 6 . 8/24/2014
oh my gowd
Guest chapter 6 . 8/11/2014
you are making the whole series even moree awesome by each capter you make it more awesome and by eacgh sentence! plz make a part 7 called rescue
Dragon chapter 4 . 8/6/2014
Ok good chapter like it do more plz
CrowFeather78 chapter 6 . 4/16/2014
omg best ever i need more, even though its a lot like warrior cats it sooooo good! :D
ACGirlof-the-past chapter 6 . 2/4/2014
oh I wonder what's going to happen to poor sweet Onei... that poor poor little lass... poor little lass...
well any way... I like this chapter along with the others! :3
wolflover962 chapter 1 . 1/16/2014
its was good but i should be longer and i sounds like every other wolf role play there is find love and then your mate dies
Alanna chapter 6 . 12/28/2013
little miss saigon chapter 4 . 9/13/2013
Are you accepting OC's? That would be great. And awesome.
Emma chapter 6 . 8/29/2013
This is an awesome story! You must keep writing!
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