Reviews for Cupid's Arrow
Guest chapter 1 . 1/20
i am writing letters to the people who are making the smurfs 3 about grouchy vexy patrick grace elway blue and victor so they special part and you can write letters for your favorite characters so help them show your love please
Flamestarter chapter 29 . 8/4/2013
This story was amazing! I can't wait to read the others! :D

and i don't know about you guys but somehow i could see xavier and meena getting together... i mean they are both magical and around the same age, meena is like 800 something and xavier is like 1100, so they are pretty close just 300 years off and they balance each other out i think

Fire and Earth!
Flamestarter chapter 21 . 8/4/2013
Scaredy was so brave! Oh give him a hug from me and a high five! :D and it's so sweet of crafty to sing a lullaby to snappy like that! it was just too sweet and cute! Hugs for all! :)
Flamestarter chapter 4 . 8/2/2013
Will the love arrow affect eventually wear off? i can't wait to see what happens if it does! love your writing! :D
Ooh la la (Britney Spears) "so baby come with me and be my ooh la la!"
Spannerette chapter 29 . 1/19/2013
P.S. could i meet up with Handy sometime? its just that i heard his singing and it was great
Zinka17 chapter 29 . 7/17/2012
What a great way to end the story! There were so many interesting things about it. I'm shocked though because of what Benevolent said about the path Crafty used to take. I can't believe she ever used to be bad! I wonder if she'll ever regain her old memories. I'm very curious to find out about them!

I loved all the fluff in this chapter! So cute! And I'm super excited about your next story. Can't wait to read it!
Smurf Lover chapter 29 . 7/17/2012
The end! :( Can't wait for the next story! :D :D :D Crafty and Gutsy are SOOO CUTE TOGETHER! :D :D :D
Sapphire777 chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
(date description continued)

The moon was high in the sky by the time they reached the mighty tree. The two smurfs sighed as they realized it was time to part ways. Sweepy turned to Danielle and took both of her hands in his.

"I can' tell you how much this night an' your friendship mean to me. Your the first smurf that I feel really understands me. This was the most magical night of me life, an' I'll treasure it as long as I live."

Danielle smiled at him, her eyes glowing in the moonlight. "I agree, mate. This is the most fun I've ever had, even better than beating up that troll. I hope we can see each other again soon."

Sweepy moved closer to her and wrapped his arms around her in a hug. "I'll be lookin' forward to it. Maybe tomorrow we can do somethin'. Meet me again at the Great Oak. I'll have a surprise for you."

Danielle feigned surprise and gasped. "Why Sweepy Smurf, are you askin' me on an actual date?"

He laughed and hugged her tighter. "I am, an' I hope to see you then."

As they gazed into the each other's eyes. Sweepy did something that surprised himself and Danielle more than when he had held her hand. He leaned in and kissed her on the cheek. He kept his lips there for a few seconds before pulling away. Danielle's turquoise-violet eyes were wide when he pulled away, and she stared at him in shock. His eyes mimicked hers as he realized what he had just done.

"Danielle! I'm terribly sorry! I don't know what smurfed over me! I was just...what I mean is...I...," he then stopped as Danielle suddenly leaned up and kissed his cheek tenderly. Sweepy blushed madly as he felt her delicate lips on his skin.

When she pulled away, she smiled and took his hands again. "Don't be. I know I don' regret it."

Sweepy smiled and they hugged one last time. Danielle whistled loudly and Rhiannon landed gracefully in front of her. "Goodbye mate! Until tomorrow my friend!"

Sweepy waved to her as she flew off. "Until tomorrow...I don' think I can wait...," he whispered and smiled to himself as he walked back to the village, already missing her as she vanished into the night sky.

Danielle's POV: Well, that was my date! It was the most magical time of my life. Thank you so much frosty! You brought us together and I can't thank you enough. How can I ever repay you?

I'm also thinking of getting a fanfiction account and turning this description into a story! It will be about how I became a smurfette and how Sweepy and I fell in love. Of course, I would make 'Danielle' into a separate character and change her name and story, but it would include this description. Did you like it? If you did, I would love to know! And if you could give me any writing tips they would be greatly appreciated.

Thank you again for everything. I am sending you more chocolate because you are so awesome! Post your third story soon! I'll keep you posted about me and Sweepy:)
Your smurfy friend,

Sapphire (Danielle)
P.S. I didn't mean to post this as a review for chapter 1! I meant 29! Sorry!
Sapphire777 chapter 29 . 7/12/2012
(date description continued)

Sweepy's eyes widened as he let what she said sink in. It pained him to see her so sad. Wanting badly to comfort her, he did something that neither of them expected. He reached out and grabbed her hand, turning her around and pulling her closer to him.

Both of the blue creatures blushed at how close they were to each other, but Sweepy didn't pull away. He held her hand as he spoke. "I could never hate you, Danielle. If anythin', I like you more! I'm honored that you trust me with such a secret, and I won't tell a soul unless you give me permission. I'm sorry that you went through somethin' so terrible, an' you certainly didn' deserve it. Even though we just met, I can already tell that you are a kind, intelligent, honest, loving, wise, brave, and strong person. Your wonderful, and I would really like to be your friend and get to know the real you, even if you are a human." He blushed at what he said but still managed to give her a sly grin. " more than friends. An' even if you are a human, your still the most beautiful smurfette I've ever layed me eyes on."

Danielle was shocked at what Sweepy had just said. Her eyes were the size of dinner plates and she was blushing madly. *Wow...*she thought as she gazed at Sweepy. *That was so sweet. We've just met an' he already thinks that much of me? He has got to be the kindest bloke I've ever met. Sweet, smart, kind, strong, funny, confident, handsome...*

She shook herself out of her trance and smiled widely. "Oh, are so did I ever land an evenin' with a smurf as wonderful as you...?"

Sweepy smiled, blushing cherry red as he laughed. "You think I'm sweet! Ha! Your the first girl, besides Crafty, that hasn' complained about getting a little soot on er' hand." He then chuckled nervously. "Your also the first girl that has ever wanted ta go on a 'date' with me."

Danielle grinned. "I've always been a tomboy, even now. Bein' dirty to me means that you ave' been somewhere, done somethin' and had a good time doin' it! I'm also a wee bit surprised that the soot wasn' mine. I actually had to clean me chimney before I came, and I couldn' get it all off."

"I ave' a good feelin' that we'll be great friends..." Sweepy returned her smile. A smurfette that could clean chimneys! This day kept getting better and better!

His new friend's eyes gleamed mysteriously as she intertwined her fingers with his. "Maybe more than friends...,"

With that, they continued their walk talking about themselves and asking each other questions, never letting go of their partner's hand. They learned quite a bit about each other. Sweepy learned that Danielle's favorite color was blue, she loved country music, and that her hobbies included drawing, stargazing, hiking, doing gymnastics and martial arts, practicing magic, reading, writing, playing sports and playing music. When Sweepy mentioned singing and that he thought her voice was beautiful, she only laughed and thanked him. Danielle found out that Sweepy's favorite color was black, his favorite food was zucchini, and that his hobbies were stargazing and hiking (like her), and he also enjoyed swimming, listening to music, cooking (surprisingly) and playing smurfball. By the time they reached the hill, they knew practically everything about each other and felt like they had known each other for years.

"Where's your telescope?" asked Sweepy.

Danielle giggled. "Right here." She waved her hand and a telescope appeared out of thin air and set itself on the ground.

Sweepy's eyes widened. "Now that is smashing! Your really are something, mate."

She grinned wickedly and let go of his hand to adjust the scope. "Simple parlor tricks, bloke. You should ave' seen what I did to a troll last week when he got on me nerves."

They both laughed and poked fun at each other as they gazed up at the celestial bodies. Danielle told him the legend of Orion's belt, and explained how to navigate by using Polaris. After they had packed up the scope and sent it on its merry way, they rejoined hands and walked back in the direction of the Great Oak.
Sapphire777 chapter 29 . 7/12/2012
(date description continued)

Sweepy blushed as she took his hand and shook it heartily. "Lovely to meet you mate. I must say that you look very pretty tonight." He handed her the flower and smiled sheepishly.

Danielle blushed deeper and stuttered,"Oh...t-thank you Sweepy. Its very nice ta meet you too. You look very spiffy yourself." She sniffed the flower and sighed. "It's beautiful. Lilies are me favorite. Thank you." She smiled at was so nervous!

The two little blue creatures stayed silent for a little while, occasionally sneaking glances at each other. Danielle was the first to break the ice. "So, would you like to go for a walk? I brought me telescope and thought we could do a bit of stargazin'. Maybe get ta know each other a little."

Sweepy shook himself out of his trance. He had been staring at her, watching as different emotions flitted across her face. Her eyes, or eye, seemed to glow in the moonlight, and her accent was soothing, like a lullaby. "Oh...ehm...of course. I'd like that."

They smiled at each other and and Danielle took the flower and stuck it behind her ear. They walked silently for a while until Sweepy spoke up. " said you brought a telescope? Astronomy is one of my favorite subjects. Do you like it?"

Danielle gave him a small smile. "Yes, its one of mine too. I love reading the legends and stories of the different constellations. It makes me feel like I'm traveling back in time."

He chuckled. "Interesting. I'm sure you'd love to meet Dreamy or Papa Smurf. They love stargazing too, and Dreamy has to use it to navigate his ship. He's not the best at it, but he tries."

Danielle laughed. "Maybe someday...ta tell you the truth, I'm not even supposed ta be here. Since I am technically a 'magical being', I'm supposed to stay out of sight. But I ave' been told that I'm a bit of a rebel." She smirked and looked at Sweepy with a devilish gleam in her eye.

Sweepy smiled and snickered inwardly. "I can only imagin'. But I'm sure you would love it at the village, since you are a smurfette."

Danielle smiled sadly and shook her head. Sweepy looked at her with a worried expression. "The only problem with that bein'," she explained, "is that I'm not a real smurfette. I know in the review I said I was practicin' a spell, but I really wasn'." She looked up at him with a guilty look in her eyes. "Years ago, I was protectin' a village of pixies from an evil wizard named Carthevius. He used his wand to cast a spell on me; the Spell of Eternal Sadness. Because me strength and powers are fueled by nature, every time something terrible happens, whether its a fire or a village of magical creatures starvin' from a lack of crops, a part of me soul dies. I grow weaker each time there's a drought or an earthquake, even if a field of flowers dies I lose strength."

She looked away as she continued. "I'm sorry I didn' mention it in the review. I didn' know what you'd think of me." She sighed. "I should have just been honest. I'm not a smurfette, I'm a human bein'. I don' know of any way to break the spell, and even if I could be a real smurf, I wouldn' be worthy."

Danielle took a shaky breath. "You probably hate me for lyin' to ye. I'm sorry I wasted yer time. I'll be goin' now...," she turned around and started to walk away.
Sapphire777 chapter 29 . 7/12/2012
(date description continued)

Sweepy continued to walk in the direction of the mysterious voice. He had never heard anything like it. He focused on the words of the song as he walked.

'Come by the hills to the land where day is free'
'And stand where the peaks meet the sky and the rocks reach the sea'
'Where the rivers run clear and the bracken is gold in the sun'
'And cares of tomorrow must stop, 'till this day is done'

He finally came to a small clearing just beyond the Great Oak. He stuck his head through a bush and was shocked by what he saw. Standing there was the most beautiful smurfette he had ever seen! She was rolling a flower between her fingers and was leaning up against a tree as she sang. Long chocolate brown hair fell down her back, bangs shadowing her right eye. She had bright turquoise eyes, but they had a purple tint, making them violet in appearance. She looked fit and strong, and was noticeably taller than the other smurfettes in his village. He sighed with ecstasy as he drank in her image.

Then it hit him. "Wait a minute...violet eyes...long brown hair...tall...she sounds just like...," he trailed off as he continued to gaze at her. This smurfette looked just like his date! "Maybe its her!" he thought excitedly.

Just as he was about to call out to her, he tripped on a root and tumbled out of the bush and landed with an "oomph". Startled, the smurfette whipped around with a yelp and gaped at the creature that had fallen out of the bushes. She put a hand on her chest to steady her breathing.

"Oh, I'm terribly sorry mate! I didn't mean ta startle you!" Sweepy jumped up and went to help her off the ground.

"That's quite alright mate. I just didn't see you." the smurfette said calmly. She then took a good look at the smurf currently trying to help her up. It was Sweepy! She flushed a bright purple as she stood up.

"Are you Sapphire777?" Sweepy asked curiously. He felt his face heating up as he gazed into her pretty violet eyes.

The smurfette giggled rhythmically. "Yes, I am. You must be Sweepy Smurf. Am I correct?" Her accent was an interesting combination of Scottish and British, and it was deeper than he expected. After thinking for a minute, he realized that she was Australian.

Sweepy laughed nervously. "Yes that's me, mate."

Danielle laughed with him. She held out her little blue hand to shake. "Please, call me Danielle."
Sapphire777 chapter 29 . 7/12/2012
Hi, frosty! Its me again! I just wanted to say hello and tell you how my date with Sweepy went. Since your story brought us together, I thought you should know how it went ;)

When I got home from work (bringing the sun up, waking up the flowers, foiling Chlorhydris's plans of ridding the world of love, you know, the usual) I decided to dress up a bit. I'm more of a tom-smurf so I decided on a loose purple blouse covered in white flowers, my favorite pair of jeans, tan cowgirl boots, my white smurf cap with the blue feather, and a black leather bracelet with flowers on it. I brushed my long brown hair and left it down. I then grabbed my telescope, hopped on Rhiannon (remember, I'm smurf size so my golden eagle is the size of an actual eagle), and made my way to the Enchanted Forest.

When I had reached the Great Oak, Rhiannon left and I settled into a comfortable position to wait. I shrunk my telescope and put it in my pocket, deciding I'd walk around a bit. As I walked around, I quietly sang a song that I learned from a story I read by theRavenchild (for those of you who haven't read her stories, you should check them out) called Come By The Hills. Little did I know that I was being watched...

World's POV: As Danielle continued to sing and look at the flowers that surrounded the clearing, another smurf was approaching the Great Oak. He was wearing black pants, a black hat, and a red neckerchief. He was carrying a white Lily-like flower, and had a nervous expression on his face. It was none other than Sweepy Smurf, and he was heading to the Great Oak for his very first date. Even though his 'date' had told him to think of it as a "get to know ya" sort of thing, he was still nervous since it was technically still a date.

"Oh, I hope I don't mess this up," he thought. "She is the first girl, besides Crafty, that's ever wanted ta get ta know me." When he reached the Great Oak, he was puzzled when he didn't see anyone.

"Hmm...I wonder if she backed out...," Sweepy thought aloud and his shoulders slumped at the thought. Just when he was about to turn to go home, he heard a voice. He stopped in his tracks and listened. It was a female's voice, and she was singing! The sound was smooth and melodic, and slightly accented. He sighed dreamily as he continued to listen. It was the most beautiful voice he had ever heard! He decided to let his curiosity guide him to the the voice's source.

( I'm writing this in third person to make it easier to understand.)
bridget.remolde chapter 29 . 7/11/2012
good chapter please update soon
DBZGIRL111 chapter 29 . 7/10/2012
OK this has GOT to be the BEST CHAPTER EVER XD! my favorite part was when Crafty knocked the bucket over and onto Peewit. this story is probably the bast thing i've ever read. how many more are you gonna make?
bob chapter 29 . 7/10/2012
aww thats cute
i really enjoyed really your story
i cant wait till u update more chapters to see what happens next
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