|Reviews for Please?|
| dontblamemeimhuman chapter 1 . 7/25/2013
| Shadow Room of Souls chapter 1 . 9/5/2012
I had something like happened to me, and this really affected me.
| Almost an Actress chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
This was really, really great! The greatest poem I've found on Fanfiction. It wasn't Scootaloo's fault! ): ):
| BronyBraeburn chapter 1 . 4/20/2012
Very minimalist yet still so detailed, it's like reading a fic. By the end I felt so bad for Scootaloo, probably the closest I've ever felt to her, and I hope they can patch things up.
| Katar Jin chapter 1 . 4/7/2012
90% of the time poetry is ignored by me dont know why but i dont like it but this this i like
| Callum Mulallum chapter 1 . 4/7/2012
Wow... That was interesting. Nice take on the cmc. Love the free verse prose, by the way... Do some more sometime? :P
| DreadedCandiru2 chapter 1 . 4/7/2012
Well, this sounds realistic enough. Sweetie Belle does seem stupid enough to get all butt-hurt because life doesn't go as she thought it would and vain enough to allow it to keep on dividing them. Were I there, I'd tell Scoots to just go in there and talk. She might actually get her friend back.
| Rowanoak23 chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
Really sad and sweet.
Poor girls :C
| Amber Treelights chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
Wow, this is really sad. Honestly, I don't know if I like Sweetie Belle & Apple Bloom being THAT jealous. I can understand it, but enough to end their whole friendship, I don't know if I can see that actually happening. Still, it's really interesting, and sad, and I do like it, regardless of anything.
I wouldn't mind at all seeing this as an actual story instead of a poem. I kinda hope you do more with it sometime, as it seems like great story material. It's still lovely as a poem though, and the flow and emotion behind it is very well done. Really hope you write more CMC stuff in the future