Reviews for Fic on the Fly
mamato chapter 49 . 2/3
Do u know if this will be finished? I'm dying to read it!

Halo221 chapter 49 . 1/5
I know it's been a while, but I hope you'll continue with this story as it's been a lot of fun to read! I looked through the prompts and mine were a bit different - Unexpected guests, interrupted, or early arrival, something along those lines. That said, I do love the prompt a couple others had put (between a rock and a hard place). Hope to see an update soon!
Halo221 chapter 48 . 1/5
So Jake recognizes Edward is into Bella but just didn't piece together that the feelings were mutual?
Halo221 chapter 44 . 1/5
Aww, too bad there's a house full of super-hearing vamps or it would SO be time for that whole worshipping each other thing.
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Halo221 chapter 30 . 1/5
Nope, Eddie, that double-thump wasn't fear...
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Halo221 chapter 25 . 1/5
Interesting, I assumed they wouldn't let her return... I wonder if she insisted once she heard his name?
Halo221 chapter 21 . 1/5
Aww man! Edward, you were so close!
Halo221 chapter 19 . 1/5
Yup, yup, it's all coming together just the way I thought... Excellent
Halo221 chapter 16 . 1/5
Hahahahaha awesome!
Halo221 chapter 13 . 1/5
Yup, that was what I was afraid of... Charlie got in the way of James and crew. Well, that's my guess anyway. Let's see if it pans out.
Halo221 chapter 12 . 1/5
Lol a pencil stake!

But yeah, I am feeling pretty confident Bella knows about vamps from the wolves... especially since she uses their words.
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