Reviews for TF Prime: Unexpected
DaLadyofSouls chapter 19 . 8/3
I'm gutted you cancelled this! Sure your english is ratty, but I loved the plot and the characters too much to care. Besides, all you need is a good beta reader to fix the grammer/language issues.
Cinematronix chapter 7 . 4/13
A WHOLE NEW WOOOORLD*cough* I’m sorry
Paradox Seekeress chapter 19 . 2/19/2017
I love it and I was hoping you could on tinge but awww it's canceled lol oh well
Emma214 chapter 19 . 9/13/2016
i really loved the way the story was going with soundwave. im working on my first fanficton oc story and this given me the inspiration from the love scenes and the way the deceptions adress each other in their ranks system.
msteresa87 chapter 18 . 3/15/2015
Pretty damn good; keep up the good writing!
Guest chapter 6 . 1/21/2015
I am crying
Skullchick15 chapter 18 . 11/30/2014
Love it, but I see It hasn't been updated in quite some time. I'd love to see that change though.
OMG lol chapter 11 . 8/17/2014
Very nice chapter

I couldn't stop laughing when Bailey started singing 'im a survivor' when Lunar Chase was trying to hide her from soundwave XD XD XD *ROFL & LMAO* XD XD XD
Guest chapter 18 . 8/13/2014
Please continue i want to know whats the next chapter!
Guest chapter 18 . 7/8/2014
So when do you think you will get finished with chapter 19?
ZabuzasGirl chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
Update immediately, please!
Kohana Maru chapter 18 . 7/17/2013
I'm really liking this story.
Really love Lunar, can't wait for the next chap
Guest chapter 18 . 7/5/2013
O-o almost pissed myself when they are doing 'it'.
Guest chapter 3 . 7/5/2013
AnonymousZGirl chapter 18 . 6/30/2013
Keep up the Awesome Job on this story :)
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