Reviews for True Love's Kiss
AuricEspeon chapter 1 . 12/8/2013
Hello! I've been confused why Jounouchi has been referred to as 'Katsuya' the whole time... For Japanese names, he would be Katsuya Jounouchi but 'Katsuya' is his last name... I'm not sure if you just decided to ignore this, but I hope you understand. I don't mean to make you mad or anything...!
Narc626 chapter 14 . 4/3/2013
interesting so far. though you should have had someone whos speaks English as a first language beta the story for you. you make some weird sentences. Like "we han't meet him yet" should be "we han't seen him yet." get some one to grammar check it and repost the cleaned up version. other wise nice job.
Silver-Haired-Thief chapter 21 . 8/4/2012
:) loved the story!
dancing elf chapter 21 . 6/17/2012
nice work :)
LifeBios chapter 10 . 6/8/2012
OH MY GOD!... well that's all i can say. 00
Anime-GuardianAngel chapter 21 . 5/3/2012
It's so hard to not cry out how cute the ending was. If you make a sequel then I'll be the first person(or try to be) to read and review. I found some spelling mistakes but they didn't distract from the story.
Athene Cunicularia chapter 21 . 4/23/2012
YGOfangil4ever :Yeah... I really don't want them to leave as well, but it seems that they're happy to reunited with their families and friends after separated for 3000 years... :'(

Thank you all for reading this fic till the end~! *bow* (_ _)
YGOfangirl4ever chapter 21 . 4/22/2012
Yay, Jounouchi's found his true love! Jounouchi and Seto! Jounouchi and Seto! I'm so happy right now _ But I'm still sad the spirits had to leave. That was the only part that I didn't like in the show. That's why I'm writing a fick about them coming back, in what could be a possibl version of season 6 of Yu-Gi-Oh!DM I hate that they had to leave, it's sooo saad

TTT-TTT

Anyway, I'm so happy for Jounouchi and Seto!
Athene Cunicularia chapter 20 . 4/22/2012
YGOfangirl4ever :Thanks for your enthusiasm to this fic~

The spirit have to leave because they're not belong in this world anymore... (TT TT)

I will try my best to update this last chapter today! *bow* (_ _)
YGOfangirl4ever chapter 20 . 4/22/2012
Seto kissed Jounouchi Seto kissed Jounouchi! But whyyy did the spirits have to leave...? TT-TT Whyyyyy? And BTW Can't wait for the last chapter!

WHYYYyyyyyyyyy...next morning...!
YGOfangirl4ever chapter 19 . 4/21/2012
Yuugi is NOT nothing without Atemu, Yami Seto. Yuugi defeated Atemu and all three god cards in the final duel. And Yuugi, is going to kick your ass, just like he pharaoh did in death-T, only this will be even better! Go Yuugi!
Athene Cunicularia chapter 18 . 4/21/2012
YGOfangirl4ever : I didn't mean to hurt your feeling... I'm truly sorry :'(

But I really have to do this and I can't go back... (TT TT)
YGOfangirl4ever chapter 18 . 4/21/2012
Tenshi: OH. MY. RA! You're going to kill Ryou?

Yume: And Ryuji too...

Tenshi: Forget Ryuji, she's killingRyou! Yami, do you know what that means?

Yume: Ah- not... really, what does it mean?

Tenshi: Well obviously, it means that... that... well... I-I'm not sure what it means, but I really don'tcare I don't care what happens to Ryuji, but Whyyy? Whyyy Ryou? Why does this have to happen to him?*starts grying and shouting* Why, in the love of Hathor? Osiris, Wht dod you hae to take him? Gie him baaack! Pleaase give him back, Ra, Help us! *continues crying and shouting at the gods*

Yume:*huggs awquardly* There, there, it'll be okay, I'm sure*gets interrupted by another wae of hysterics* It's okay, It's okay, Calm down, hikari, eerything... will be just fine...
Athene Cunicularia chapter 17 . 4/20/2012
YGOfangil4ever : Thank you so much for the comments

I think that the person that love carrying sweets with him (since Anzu isn't there with them) is Ryou, because he love puff cakes and I bet that he would like to share with others, so he brought a lot of it in his pockets~ XD
YGOfangirl4ever chapter 17 . 4/20/2012
_ Ryou, the guy with the candy. That boy is just so sweet(just like Yuugi) I can't balie you made him use candy to mark the path :)) But it really fits, so, congrats on such an orriginal, hillarious yet awesome ideea ))))
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