|Reviews for A Glimmer in the Vein|
| Emma Hardy chapter 1 . 4/11/2012
Rated M? Seemed like a lot of buildup to end without much happening. Creative, though!
| rydenxdirtay chapter 1 . 4/11/2012
OMG I loved this! I wish there was more :(. Thank you for sharing.
| Lizzard43 chapter 1 . 4/11/2012
Nice ending. I was all set to cry but then you pulled out that ending...I'm impressed! Nice short story.
| mommymac0508 chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
I loved it so good I wish there was more if you want to I promise to read and review
| mcamastow chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
Very good tale.
| 3 Sunrises chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
I really, really enjoyed this story (and it seems like it could have potential for a multi-fic if you pleased?)! I have no real experience of holograms except for Princess Leah in Star Wars, but somehow this totally worked for me. I loved the idea of going to a place, a physical place, where one feels safe and calm and comforted. I loved that Bella was incredibly heroic but flawed and that Edward-the-hologram helped her to try to be more whole. I'd be totally intrigued to know how much of Edward's self or essence was in his hologram - presumably he wouldn't know anything that had happened on the ship? Thanks so much for writing! My favorite entry in the contest, for sure!
| polyphany chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
| KimberlyAnnT chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
So good.. I loved it ..
| soton chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
What a great story - please consider continuing this.
| Esmi76 chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
This is spectacular I live it I hope you have plans in that agile brain of yours to continue this even for a few chapters to know what I&E are going through :)
| MDtwiwriter chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
Excellent sci-fi story. You really so well with these AU stories featuring our favorite characters. Thank you for sharing it.
| shehazi chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
Very cool.I really enjoyed this.
Thank you for sharing.
| mmsinful chapter 1 . 4/8/2012
I was happy when I found out that you wrote this. I love all your stories. I'm hoping that you'll make this into a longer story if not at least a 2/shot? One can hope, LOL. Thanks for writing this. It was an awesome story.
| heygirl18 chapter 1 . 4/8/2012
Umm... wow. Seriously, wow. Your story has left me speechless and wanting more! I adored the relationship Bella and Hologram Edward had, and I got all torn up over HE's attempts at the end to save Bella's life. The last line from Real Edward? Perfect spot to end it :)
I wonder what it was that triggered the glitch in the first place? I would love to read more of these two!
Good luck for the contest xx
| Fliberty chapter 1 . 4/8/2012
I really enjoyed this.
It was an interesting way of introducing the characters to have Bella as Captain and Edward as her hologram/therapist.
Does it make me a bad person that I started thinking of all of the potential (mis?)uses of the holoroom?
Actually, I enjoyed the chaste, supportive nature of the relationship between them. The sadness in Edward's expression and his desperation to save her was touching.
I am curious to know more about what happened with Edward's programming since their interactions seemed quite unusual. Was that how the hologram was supposed to function, or was there some type of glitch as the real Edward seemed to suggest?
I'd love to know if there will be anything between Bella and the real Edward. She seemed so closed off but I would like to think he could find a way through her carefully constructed defences.