|Reviews for Angel Cross: Binding Darkness|
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/26/2014
Nicely written so far! I was just wondering why isn't Patamon mentioned in the summary? Won't Patamon really be a part of the story?
| ultima-owner chapter 3 . 8/17/2014
| SAE reviewer chapter 1 . 7/27/2014
Greetings from your anon SAE reviewer! I'll tell you a secret: I am not fandom blind to either Digimon or Kingdom Hearts. So, with that in mind, let's go!
This is a good blending of the two worlds so far, and better than many crossovers I've seen, which simply dump two or more worlds together. This keeps both of them as what they are, and promises to bring more of a wider picture in the future with the eventual trips to other worlds that is one of the hallmarks of the Kingdom Hearts series.
I kind of wonder if any of the Digimon will become summons or otherwise work into the world set up. I suppose that remains to be seen. As I know already what in general *should* happen with Riku, I'm not going to go into detail with that. That may change in future reviews, depending on what does happen.
Characterization wise everything seemed well indeed for both fandoms and I didn't see any spelling or grammar errors. I hope that holds true for the rest of the story as it unfolds. Time alone will tell that, however.
| RazenX chapter 3 . 7/26/2012
Good story so far. Just read the first three chapters, so I figured I'd give my thoughts.
For starters, I think the way you seem to be going about this crossover, by focusing on a few characters who are wandering the universe, was a good way to go about this. It means that you it is easier to develop the characters you have and the relationships between theme. Pairing TK and Kari (both light associated) with Riku (dark associated) seems to be a good group.
The plot seems interesting so far. I like how you put this after 1 but before CoM. Torsten and TK getting his keyblade were both good twists. Not much really to say since its only 3 chapters in.
Another good thing is that you managed to keep the characters in character. In the beginning with the relationship between Davis and TK, it seemed like I could watch it happen in 02.
Your writing style is nice, with good description (but not excessively so) and good interactions between the cast.
If there is one fault with the story so far, it is a pacing problem. I feel that these 3 chapters could have been stretched into multiple chapters, and that a lot of moments happened to quickly for the full effect. For example, when Riku first arrives, the group just instantly trusts him and invites him to a party. While I know the destined are trustworthy, it seems a bit odd that everyone just instantly accepts the stranger and invites him into his home.
Another example is what happened with Kari. It would have worked much better (especially because chapter 1 ended with her) if we actually saw what happened with Kari and Torsten. The last example would be this chapter. A lot of the "deaths" seemed to not really get a reaction, and just seemed to happen. When Tai loses for example, everyone just keeps fighting, with only Kari shocked. Would the whole group be appalled and heartbroken by seeing this? It is the same later with Ken.
While that was a problem, I think with the group just traveling to other worlds the pacing should even out. Just something to think about while writing.
Other than that, good story and can't wait for more-X
| Starowner chapter 2 . 6/20/2012
Amazing Kaito! It's getting mysterious...Update soon xx
| Starowner chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
Epic :3 I love Riku's entrance! Update soon Kaito! xx